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Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-02-14 12:41 PM

I felt your breath today
as a gentle breeze blew by
smelled your perfume
dancing on breeze like a kite

I went to a flower store
and just looked
watching smiles comming
and going
and thought of you

Everyday I look for you
In the faces of the crowd
but fail to find
that one angelic one
that used to be mine

I wrote you a poem
which I'll never send
sung you a song
you'll never hear

I wonder if you're still
the beauty
in my memories
I smile
as I smell a flower
deciding to leave your memory
on my shelf
for me to smile another day.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2003-02-14 12:47 PM

lovely and very touching...*smiling*
very well done..

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-02-14 12:58 PM

Lovely....with such an ache.
Happy Valentine's Day.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-02-14 01:01 PM

send her the poem, let her know........

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-02-14 01:07 PM

Hmmmmm...this is a hard day. I too have hard memories. I love the way you refer to smell a lot in your pieces. Smell is so important to me. I love a man that wears cologne and I relate many memories to smell.

As always, loved it.

Susan

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2003-02-14 01:10 PM

nicely done Brad... I enjoyed the read.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-02-14 01:15 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Brad, this is so very beautifully heartbreaking, sweet friend, I hope you have found love now you can cherish forever and ever, as you are so deserving of it! (sigh) This is very touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing and have a...

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

7 posted 2003-02-14 01:32 PM

thank you

sellout007
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since 2003-02-14

Posts 108
Suburbs of Chicago, IL

8 posted 2003-02-14 02:09 PM

You are quickly becoming my favorite read on this board.

Thanks again for the memories reading this has brought to me.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2003-02-14 03:22 PM

Brad - you write with such tenderness, this is a beautiful poem...

BC

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2003-02-14 03:33 PM

Another beautiful write, Brad.
Hugs to you,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

11 posted 2003-02-14 03:33 PM

A great read. Honest and beautiful.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

12 posted 2003-02-14 04:50 PM

thank you

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

13 posted 2003-02-14 05:08 PM

Brad...sometimes the memories become a little bais through time, they don't dull, but rather become shaped to form our perfect image...perhaps put the memories on the shelf and embrace the future