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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-02-14 10:56 AM


“WHEN THEY TOUCHED”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I remember last summer when
we sat on a mountain high,
and the cool breeze sang
with your hair in the wind…

You were more than lovely that day,
with eyes sparkling in the sun,
a smile charming with you,
and your lips beguiling when
they touched mine…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-14 10:57 AM


How romantic. *sighs*

Cold hands means a warm heart

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2003-02-14 10:58 AM


Another romantic lovely Bill.  Well done.
Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-02-14 12:03 PM


yes very romantic!
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-02-14 12:06 PM


it's nice to remember
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-02-14 12:11 PM














(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, I long to feel the first touch of true love and can only imagine what it really feels like! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing, and...





May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton













"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-14-2003 12:39 PM).]

inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2003-02-14 01:05 PM


Bill Charles , Valentine's DAy,
need i say more?

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7 posted 2003-02-14 01:07 PM


Now Bill... you know my hair doesn't blow in the wind..and I did not kiss you!! I swear, buy a man a bottle of Scary Smooth and he drinks half of it and starts making up love poems...


Very nicely done Bill.. tender, romantic, and touching..

Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-02-14 01:14 PM



OOOH! Oh beautiful!!
Happy Valentine's Day Bill!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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9 posted 2003-02-14 02:31 PM


Very tender and romantic... I like this! *S*
Albert J. Allie
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10 posted 2003-02-14 03:51 PM


wonderful visions I seen while reading!! Thank you thank you!!!!
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11 posted 2003-02-14 05:04 PM


Ohhh...always the romantic Bill Lovely !
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