Open Poetry #24 |
When They Touched |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“WHEN THEY TOUCHED” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I remember last summer when we sat on a mountain high, and the cool breeze sang with your hair in the wind… You were more than lovely that day, with eyes sparkling in the sun, a smile charming with you, and your lips beguiling when they touched mine… ~~~~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
How romantic. *sighs* Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Another romantic lovely Bill. Well done. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
yes very romantic! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's nice to remember |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-14-2003 12:39 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Bill Charles , Valentine's DAy, need i say more? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Now Bill... you know my hair doesn't blow in the wind..and I did not kiss you!! I swear, buy a man a bottle of Scary Smooth and he drinks half of it and starts making up love poems... Very nicely done Bill.. tender, romantic, and touching.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OOOH! Oh beautiful!! Happy Valentine's Day Bill! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very tender and romantic... I like this! *S* |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
wonderful visions I seen while reading!! Thank you thank you!!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ohhh...always the romantic Bill Lovely ! |
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