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an unchanged past
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an unchanged past |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL 
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Fairly new at this writing thing.Kinda just write in paragraph form and dont know how to edit it to well yet...always can use some advice o) I see alot of great words written in here. Kudos to you all and keep it up. Gives me something to read at night. Heading for bed, my pillow is calling my name. Happy Valentines Day Everyone.... ************* an unchanged past I want it to be the way it used to be, when it was just you and me. All we needed was each other and nothing would stand in our way. Staying up all night, talking until the sun rose. Thousands of miles away, ive never felt so close. Listening to your voice over the phone, reading your thoughts to me. I never thought simple words such simple words could be so comforting. Simple words that didnt have to mean a thing, you sat and read to me. Over the phone is where i fell in love, in love with someone i could never have. My heart i knew would never let me love like that again. If i only knew then what i know now things might still be... between you and me. Would i have been able to change the past? Go back, try and fix the wrongs, could i maybe have made things last? Please god I dont want to grow old alone. Give me someone ill always be able to call my own. When i call her name, i want her to be there. In the middle of the night, i want her to be there. At my last few hours, i want here to be there. Standing faithfuly next to me, always there for me through eternity. [This message has been edited by sellout007 (02-15-2003 01:20 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
WELCOME!  Nice to read your words...and you don't need any help or advice...you've got it pretty good to me! We will enjoy having you here, I'm sure! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome to passions...and maybe you should call her and read this to her..and tell her the truth...i know it might melt me...h |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! You're on a good start; you'll find all of the different doors for critique and discussion, thoughts, and feelings, and above all poetry and prose, as you amble through our blue halls. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
passing shadows - Thanks for the welcome and the kind words. Nice booster for my shy self. 1slick_lady - Belive me id be happy just to talk to her again. We have... drifted apart per say. *shrug* Lifes lessons i guess. We learn and grow. Sunshine - Thank you for the email, i appreciate the warm welcome! |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
Dont mind me, posting in my own thread so i can add it to my library. If there is an easier way to keep track of threads please let me know *lol* A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Daniel, this is such a wonderfully tender debut, sweet friend, I love it, I wish this drewam to come true for you and for everything to metamorphosize, take flight to your hopes, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Daniel, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
Noah - Thanks alot for the very warm welcome and kind words! And id also like to add that you are the most uplifting & joyous person i have ever met! If everyone had 1/1,000,000,000 of your spirit this world would no doubt be perfect! A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome! I sure hope she reads this. Also hope you enjoy your time posting and reading here, as there is a great deal of variety and many styles of writing represented at this site. Welcome, new poetry loving friend! |
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