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Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

0 posted 2003-02-14 01:45 AM

Mirrors
Glorious fragments of speculum, which
peer inward
Despite their true meaning,
bare no reflection upon me,
but to thy inner self,
So that I might behold.

Abundant stories told from there,
Which rest upon a tender spirit
and bare witness to stifled tunes
that play alone.

Innocence long lost, found in traces
of paleness, long for revival.
Subdued phrases that speak frequently
to themselves, echo from emptiness.

My affection be your savior
and my love will compose symphonies
that your heart will chant, ever more.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-02-14 02:36 AM

beautiful music!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-02-14 05:18 AM

Albert~
This is a lovely write...I enjoyed it.
I'll be looking for more from you.
Welcome to Passions.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-02-14 08:38 AM

nice... I enjoyed the read and look forward to seeing more from you.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2003-02-14 08:44 AM

Very nicely done... A grand reflective piece indeed...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2003-02-14 08:51 AM

This is a lovely read and I will surely be looking forward to more of your work. Well done indeed.....Welcome to Passions

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-02-14 08:58 AM

Albert,
My affection be your savior
and my love will compose symphonies
that your heart will chant, ever more.
Reads a little narcissistic to me, LOL enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-02-14 09:11 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Albert, I know these images all too familiar too, I always dream of my love and still haven't ever got to hold a girls hand and yet the ghost of some love I know no name of always reflects in the prisms of my soul! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

8 posted 2003-02-14 11:19 AM

I am glad you all like this piece. Seymour. In that verse, it is me teling her, that though she is saddened and has been hurt, I will lift her up from there and be the one to love her forever and that she will need to know of no other love. I wasn't trying to be narcissistic. But I love seeing how others translate my poetry. To see how it affects another and what conceptions they have of it.

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