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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
You burn so fast old before your time seems things good never last when you count them in your mind Rainbows and blonde haired ladies often dissappear after the storm embed the trace of fair wheather sadies you struggle to get back to the norm Reflections of passion, renewed by summer fashions as the trip replays over and over in your mind another day pass' you've fooled the mass' into thinking no harm, your going to be just fine So walk quietly into another day never show your scars from the night retain a shadow of the truth for yourself along the way your smile must hide your sorrow until tomorrow for your being wrong don't make them right Past is past and tommorow is today yesterday someday you'll learn the answers or perhaps... the questions Copyright 2001 Dennis Hicks |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Dennis, this is so very true, sweet friend, but yet if we keep the sorrow concealed for too long it can hurt much more in the long run and we should show a smile but all the while find a way to release the blue! (big hugggsssssss) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I like this alot, it seems very realistic to me. And I heard once you can never learn the answers until you ask the questions. I suppose that means larning them helps.. but I think we all know them, somewhere in us. Enjoyed this a lot! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
honest and raw...what a write! |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Much wisdom is nestled among these words, DH...  |
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