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His Poetry - Thunder
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His Poetry - Thunder |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~* His Poetry Voice ~ Thunder *~ Out of the darkness lightening strikes Lighting up a coal purple sky Leaving a blue-white flash in my eye. Mesmerized I stare upwards At God’s charges of electricity Amazed by the wonder, beauty and simplicity. In such wonder I stare as it darts and dashes In no particular pattern or chosen direction. Some watch it, still others will seek protection. A spectacular bouquet of neon flowers With bright snowy blue-white open petals Creating a light show of flickering metals. Then in a blink of an eye, as quick as a wink It is all over and gone from sight Now dark shaded hues replace that brilliant light. Soon we are to hear the leftover remnants As you almost hear words in a loud thunderous rumble. I think it is God’s way of keeping us humble. He reminds us he is the one of power and true strength Speaking through all of nature’s wonder. His quill dipped in lightening, his poetry ~ thunder. ~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~  [This message has been edited by Mysteria (02-12-2003 07:23 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Brava!! Magnificent Mysteria!! This is a wonderful keeper m'friend. ~ Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keeps people humble... that, it does. Excellent! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Exactly! He is the true Lord, NOT Bush. I have lost so much respect for him recently just as I think he has failed to realize that and I only hope again our leaders can be redeemed and embrace love rather than hate through diplomacy! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I pray urgently for relief, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
God is smiling............. Warm hugs, Linda |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So beautiful, Sharon...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I agree, Sharon. God shows himself in many ways..  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you for understanding where I was coming from I really appreciate that.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Great photos, both yours, Mysteria, and 'Deer's...and He should be the ONLY one to hold the sword of vengence... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This one is among your best!. Almost as amazing as the lightening itself. Very descriptive passages with an important theme interlaced. BRavo! Superb!, my dear Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Excellent indeed - May this en-lightning piece bestow a thundrous message to all... This is among your best, Mysterias one... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sharon, this is just about the best poem I have ever read. The power of your words should stop everyone in their tracks. We all need a reminder of who's in charge. Fabulous message and powerful picture. I love Michael's picture also. Please, send this off to our president. Huggles, Marti 'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.' |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sneaking back in, forgot to save it!! Marti |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You summed it up perfectly, wonderful write.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
"In God We Trust" Thanks everyone - you know I almost got scared again over Code Orange, and realized if I was afraid to live today now that was the real worry. An old prayer came to me that is used by so many organizations that is forgotten by those not in any "organization" of well being. It is called the Serenity Prayer and it goes like this: God, grant me the serenity To accept the things I cannot change, The courage to change the things I can, And the wisdom to know the difference. Amen ~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon...I have to agree with Nan. This is definitely one of your best and also one of my favorites of yours. A wonderful message and so beautifully expressed. I just love this. Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (02-14-2003 06:54 AM).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
He reminds us he is the one of power and true strength Speaking through all of nature’s wonder. His quill dipped in lightening, his poetry ~ thunder. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well said with much beauty! Deb |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thanks again for enjoying - art and photography truly speak to me and I just tell you what they say  |
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