Open Poetry #24 |
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Konrad’s Odyssey - I |
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Sunshine
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Konrad’s Odyssey - I Two days later, his migraine having subsided like sand under waves, remnants of the brain’s holocaust now carried back to it’s deepest ocean it would lay low, long before it would hurl it’s torrent at him again. He rose, feeling grimier than the sheets beneath him, headed for the green-tiled shower, and stood under water so cold, until it turned lukewarm, then grabbed up a scummy soap bar, nailing it into his skin, thankful the migraine was gone, almost eager to continue his trip. His mind raced ahead, as by now, Travis should be there. He had run across his old friend back in that hole-in-the-wall eatery, there in the desert, still driving that dad-burned truck, thinking, didn’t they all push along the damnedest pieces of sheet steel hooked up to mechanized horse hooves all of ‘em. Jake, he drove the best of the worst… Iambe, she fixed all the losers, Dillon…she rode along in the best…. He had counted on Travis to carry news to Iambe that Konrad would be coming; he had done his best to locate Dillon, and Jake, by the long-suffering Western Union, “Be at Iambe’s. Stop. Konrad.” Jake, he probably spat on the ‘gram, Dillon…if she could be found at the last known, would probably know. She was like that, that girl. Intuitive. That girl. Dana… Dana had been long ago, the only true haven Konrad had ever known. Would probably ever know. The luke turned to cold, so he stepped out, no mirror to look in to, never mind, he didn’t need to see the scars, nor heed the reminders… he had the certificate for that. ~*~ Iambe studied Travis, then looked beyond him, and Travis decided, silently, to “damn Konrad anyway,” then sipped on his bitter coffee. Travis did not need to be here, Iambe was too close, and too far away, once again, he felt helpless, loose, losing, long gone, as he saw the bitter begin to crease her lips, the tight pull drawing the red to a pink, and she had looked so good when she first opened the door. Now, she was beginning to shell again, that shell that he had seen crack, some times, when the moon was right, and the liquor, smooth, but not now. ~*~ Jake stood in the water, tanned, dark, gleaming like snake skin, dripping off the remnants of his last dive, then pulled out the wet, soggy ‘gram, throwing it to the bank. He walked up to the bush holding his jeans, pulled them on over his wet, tanned legs, and cinched the buckle, a worn, faded, Rodeo winning buckle from some 30 years ago, muttered something about “damn K” and climbed into his worse-for-wear truck. He headed toward Iambe’s. ~*~ Dillon’s hair was as red as the clay they had grown up in, herself, Iambe, Jake, and Konrad, her restaurant wit and skill borne from somewhere gave her verve and nerve, the shy of her having faded long ago in that trip she took when she had skipped toward them, them that weren’t daddy. Now, the pensive lines crossed her brow, she tucked her fingers into her cotton skirt’s pocket, as if she could feel the ink press into her skin, then she stiffened visibly, her spine tingling, walked over to her day manager, whispering, “Damn it, I have to leave for awhile,” then grabbed up her leather vest, slipped her arms through worn holes, walked into a sun that saw a blaze of fire from yesterday’s fright, and headed, towards Iambe’s. ~*~ Iambe. Jake. Dillon. Konrad. Apache Tears. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
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This is what they must mean when they say... well worth waiting for. ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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ummmm Capt? .... me thinks she jumped the canyon ![]() the moth AND Jake are smiling.... and..driving ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh wow.....yes....and? Oh I see it ...on my way....to part two. Excellent story....keep'em coming. ~Hugs~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Whoa!!!! Me defiently likes Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very interesting...now to part 2... ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
OK.... not bad for a flatlander ![]() on to see what indeed you weave next. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Pretty darn good writing for a legal type person... enjoyed much. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
On my way to part 2 Wonderful Karilea. Maree ![]() The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change. |
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