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SmartChick
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0 posted 2003-02-13 10:24 AM



Dearest One
~ By Sue ~

Very gently place your arms
Around me and hold me close
Lovely things I will whisper to you
Everytime you are near me
Nothing can ever keep me away or
Take away this love I feel inside
I will share these emotions with you
Needing more with each embrace
Each time you hold me so close
So hold on tight my dear

Dearest one, I love you most
And will keep you in my heart
You are the only one for me

2-12-03




[This message has been edited by SmartChick (02-13-2003 10:49 AM).]

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-02-13 10:44 AM


Very nicely written
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-02-13 10:49 AM


A nice acrostic Sue
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3 posted 2003-02-13 10:50 AM


Sue, this is a really goo love poem.
I like it.
Oh, and the font style adds to the poem, doesn't it? I think so, too.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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4 posted 2003-02-13 12:22 PM


very nice
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5 posted 2003-02-13 12:25 PM


WOW!!! This is nice, Thank You for sharing.
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6 posted 2003-02-13 07:26 PM


nice
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7 posted 2003-02-13 07:33 PM


WOW!!  Sue..this is so lovely!
Happy Valentine's Day top you!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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