Open Poetry #24 |
Dearest One (an acrostic) |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Dearest One ~ By Sue ~ Very gently place your arms Around me and hold me close Lovely things I will whisper to you Everytime you are near me Nothing can ever keep me away or Take away this love I feel inside I will share these emotions with you Needing more with each embrace Each time you hold me so close So hold on tight my dear Dearest one, I love you most And will keep you in my heart You are the only one for me 2-12-03 [This message has been edited by SmartChick (02-13-2003 10:49 AM).] |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very nicely written |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A nice acrostic Sue M |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is a really goo love poem. I like it. Oh, and the font style adds to the poem, doesn't it? I think so, too..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
WOW!!! This is nice, Thank You for sharing. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Sue..this is so lovely! Happy Valentine's Day top you! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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