He Tries To Describe His Love To Me........from one of Gary's poems to me

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garysgirl

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0 posted 2003-02-13 11:31 AM

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Such beautiful poems and songs
he always writes to me
He also paints colorful pictures
with words for me to see
His love for me is
as beautiful as can be
A forever love we have found
I certainly do believe

He says if he could describe his love
in just a single word
It would start with "A", end in "Z"
one no-one has ever heard
His words are as beautiful
as the song of a bird
They are the sweetest words
my ears have ever heard

His love would circle the Heavens and back
until the end of time
If his love he could write
in just a single line
Pictures he draws for me
in all colors, are so sublime
And to think this wonderful man
wants to forever be mine

He can't describe his love for me
in just a single day
He says there would certainly
be no possible way
And to try would make him feel bad
and sad, he did say
If he had to describe his love for me
in just a single day

If he had to describe his love for me
in just a single song
He says it would be the greatest ballad
ever to be sung
And that it would surely be
a million, billion hours long
If he had to desribe his love for me
in just a single song

He says he can't describe his love for me
in just a single life
He asked if I would, please
become his loving wife
With this wonderful love we have
we hope there will never be much strife
He wants to describe his love for me
for the rest of our life

To describe his love, he says
there will never be enough time or ways
But he promises to keep trying
for the rest of our days
From this, our forever love
we both promise not to stray
We promise to love each other
for forever and a day
*~*~*~*~*~*

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-13-2003 11:33 AM).]

Sunshine

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1 posted 2003-02-13 11:53 AM

What a lovely interpretation of his sentiment to you...thank you for sharing such a private moment...

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-02-13 11:56 AM

Ethel...very beautiful...
I too feel as though I just overheard a very private, loving, conversation.
Wonderful thoughts!
~Hugs & Smiles~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2003-02-13 12:17 PM

garysgirl - a special closeness you both have. I wish you the best...

BC

garysgirl

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4 posted 2003-02-13 12:22 PM

Thank you, Karilea. actually, I would much rather be able
to put his poems he writes to me on here, because I
don't do them justice. He can't post because of not
having a computer. But, he likes for me to try to
put them together like this. I just don't do it very
often, because I don't feel like I do a very good job of it.
Thank you for your reply....

garysgirl

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5 posted 2003-02-13 12:26 PM

Nancy Lee, I'm glad that you liked it. I had posted this when I first came to Passions. I just changed it a little bit. Like I told Karilea, I don't feel that I do his poems justice, but he likes for me to do this. This really is from a poem he wrote to me.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

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6 posted 2003-02-13 12:31 PM

Bill, thank you very much for your well wishes. We do have a closeness like I've never shared with anyone else. We love each other unconditionally. We accept each other just as we are and don't try to change each other. When we don't agree on something, we try to talk it out and compromise at least. A relationship is not always 50/50 every single minute. It takes lots of communication, I think. And, we do a lot of that.
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Well, I didn't mean to say all that....guess I'm in a talking mood? LOL

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-13-2003 12:32 PM).]

the_loner_23
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7 posted 2003-02-13 12:35 PM

So romantic. *sighs*

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

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8 posted 2003-02-13 12:39 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Ethel, this is soooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I'm so happy for you and could feel the heart conversation in your words, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I sure hope he can post his poems soon too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Margherita
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Eternity

9 posted 2003-02-13 01:37 PM

Isn't true love just like this .... we always want to express it and never it seems enough!
Very beautiful!
Margherita

NewEnglandlazurlu
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10 posted 2003-02-13 01:43 PM

Seems you are one very fortunate lady to receive such love and affection. You hang onto that man!

Hugs, Marti

'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.'

Ericc
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11 posted 2003-02-13 07:07 PM

Beauty runs deep in you both.
Eric

ThunderMage
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12 posted 2003-02-13 07:43 PM

He must love you as much as I love Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
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garysgirl

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13 posted 2003-02-13 08:45 PM

Julie,
thank you sweet friend....

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Noah,
thank you, friend, for the sweet words.
You always know what to say.....

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Margherita,
Yeah, it seems we can't seem to get it all
out, sometimes. Thank you for your sweet reply..

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Happy Valentines Day to you all
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Heart Hugs from
Ethel

garysgirl

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Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2003-02-13 09:05 PM

Martie,
oh yes, friend, I feel like a very lucky
lady, and I do intend to hang onto him.....

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Eric,
thank you for saying such a nice thing.
I appreciate it....

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ThunderMage,
Yes, I do believe he does love me. I'm
glad for you and Hulie, too...

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Happy Valentine's Day to you all...

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Heart Hugs to all of you from
Ethel

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