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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-02-13 10:22 AM



The demons don't talk any more
neither do they whisper
but their presence is like
a black velvet painting
in a fine art gallery
forever reminding of the grip
they hold on my soul

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1 posted 2003-02-13 10:29 AM


Whoa! Dark and brooding and really pulled this reader into your space. Very effectively written!

Warm hugs,
EA

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2 posted 2003-02-13 10:29 AM


Brad,
Good words, good write, good read.

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-02-13 10:43 AM


thank you!
Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2003-02-13 10:51 AM


This very well could have been written for someone very close to me.  She is bi-polar and although she is stable right now, you just never know.

Very well done.

I gave up on trying to email, apparently you are far too elusive.

Susan C.

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5 posted 2003-02-13 10:54 AM


I have been checking and checking..I gues my email does suck. I will be getting dsl back soon at home so I'll finally be able to get into my yahoo account. I did get your email and emailed you back.
Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2003-02-13 10:58 AM


I just checked mine, only thing there is an email entitled "Cheekys0d, grow your penis safely and naturally."  (sigh).

Susan

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7 posted 2003-02-13 12:32 PM


we all have demons
Brad Majors
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8 posted 2003-02-13 12:55 PM


I'll email you a bunch of times and hopefully one gets through
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9 posted 2003-02-13 01:34 PM


Brad - excellent write. Fear & Panic are my demons....wishing I could cage them forever..but maybe we are supposed to just ignore them rather than constantly allow them to have free rent in our minds. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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