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pk
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0 posted 2003-02-12 01:28 PM


Dedicated to a great friend who is going through a tough time and who I couldn’t give any good advice to. Hope this helps in a way cuz its from the heart.


Why do I see it so clear?

Why do I see it so clear?
Green grass, little smiles
Love to give like the pink ribbons of faith
Maybe if I become that look, you know, that look when someone has caught you.
Then you will believe my love is true

Why do I see it so clear?
Like two in a tango
Smiles for free
One lustful act, expected me to be free from sweet nothings and meaningful goodnights

Why do I see it so clear?
Long to kiss your ear
Spend one more sec on that little boy stretch mark
To where I can breath once more, life

Why do I see it so clear?
Is it so hard to see
I would give you my last drop of blood
Even both my kidneys if needed
I want you to have all of me

Why do I see it so clear?
No Romeo or Adonis quite obviously
But my personality is molded to you
I LOVE YOU, don’t turn from me
Our friendship is strong
But my love has grown even stronger.

"Imagine what you would do if you knew no one was looking"

© Copyright 2003 pk - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-12 01:28 PM


This is so beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

pk
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since 2003-02-11
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2 posted 2003-02-13 01:01 AM


thank you very much

"Imagine what you would do if you knew no one was looking"

winston
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since 2002-12-19
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NW of Eden
3 posted 2003-02-13 11:02 AM


This is like a tapestry of someone's mind.

It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency.
--G. "DUBYA" BUSH. June 14, 2001. Unaware of rolling TV camera.

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-02-13 12:25 PM


lucky person you write to
Brad Majors
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5 posted 2003-02-13 01:19 PM


very wonderfully done
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