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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-02-13 08:52 AM



~*~

With the setting sun,
Shadows grow dark and longer,
~ As do my own days.

The moon is calling,
"Find your way back to your home,
~ Return to the stars".

~*~




[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-13-2003 08:54 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-13 08:56 AM


nicely done... sets quite a mood..and uses images to convey more...

I enjoyed!

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2 posted 2003-02-13 09:01 AM



With the rising sun
Another night is now done
The moon sets after

Slipping up with night
Shines giving us its pale light
And star beam’s laughter

Gloom

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3 posted 2003-02-13 09:03 AM


Beautiful Linda. I'm searching for the stars, but can't seem to get through the darkness.

Huggles, Marti

'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.'

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4 posted 2003-02-13 09:13 AM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Linda, this reminded me of the new Coldplay song "The Scientist", which is a beautiful piano rock ballad where he croons "I'm going back home to the stars!" (kiss on cheek) You always write such gorgeous imagery, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2003-02-13 09:15 AM


Captain ~

Thank you!--and I "enjoyed" your favorable mini-critique as well!

Valentine hugs,
EA

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6 posted 2003-02-13 09:17 AM


Good morning Professor!

You honor me with your delightful poetic response! Merci beaucoups!

Valentine hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-02-13 09:19 AM


My dear Marti, it pains me that you are in a dark place right now.  If I could command the sun, the moon and the stars, I would bid them to forever light your way...

Sending you lots of loving hugs,
Linda


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8 posted 2003-02-13 09:23 AM


Noah, I appreciate your sweet and thoughtful reply---but, my friend, when have you ever replied otherwise?!? Have a great day!

Valentine hugs,
Linda

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9 posted 2003-02-13 09:25 AM



Luminous silence
only color fills the space
between night and day.

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2003-02-13 09:27 AM


Enchantress, I find it extremely complimentary when I receive a poetic reply. Thank you for this lovely one!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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11 posted 2003-02-13 09:32 AM



To all stars fly hope,
to conquer a universe
T'will never occur

For hope goes farther
as moons are counted in round
hope continues flight

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2003-02-13 09:37 AM


Sunshine, your wonderfully up-lifting poem touches my spirit. Thank you!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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13 posted 2003-02-13 09:39 AM


There are times when my days seem to grow longer. But, I never give up searching for the light.
Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-02-13 09:47 AM


Good morning, Sue! I am pleased that you continue to search for the light to brighten dark days!

May the light that you reach for, forever banish the darkness...

Warm hugs,
Linda

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15 posted 2003-02-13 10:17 AM


Earth Angel - I'm on the way...

BC

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16 posted 2003-02-13 10:20 AM


Earth Angel
Who could best an Angel? Enjoyed.

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17 posted 2003-02-13 10:22 AM


BC ~

Expect me to see me when the moon is full...

Valentine hugs,
Linda

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18 posted 2003-02-13 10:25 AM


Good morning, Mr. T.

"Who can best an angel?", you asked.
Why, an archangel such as yourself could!

Have a wonderful day, my lord

Angel hugs and kisses,

EA

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