Open Poetry #24 |
The Moon Is Calling |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~*~ With the setting sun, Shadows grow dark and longer, ~ As do my own days. The moon is calling, "Find your way back to your home, ~ Return to the stars". ~*~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-13-2003 08:54 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... sets quite a mood..and uses images to convey more... I enjoyed! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
With the rising sun Another night is now done The moon sets after Slipping up with night Shines giving us its pale light And star beam’s laughter Gloom |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Beautiful Linda. I'm searching for the stars, but can't seem to get through the darkness. Huggles, Marti 'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.' |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Linda, this reminded me of the new Coldplay song "The Scientist", which is a beautiful piano rock ballad where he croons "I'm going back home to the stars!" (kiss on cheek) You always write such gorgeous imagery, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Captain ~ Thank you!--and I "enjoyed" your favorable mini-critique as well! Valentine hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning Professor! You honor me with your delightful poetic response! Merci beaucoups! Valentine hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear Marti, it pains me that you are in a dark place right now. If I could command the sun, the moon and the stars, I would bid them to forever light your way... Sending you lots of loving hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, I appreciate your sweet and thoughtful reply---but, my friend, when have you ever replied otherwise?!? Have a great day! Valentine hugs, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Luminous silence only color fills the space between night and day. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enchantress, I find it extremely complimentary when I receive a poetic reply. Thank you for this lovely one! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To all stars fly hope, to conquer a universe T'will never occur For hope goes farther as moons are counted in round hope continues flight |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sunshine, your wonderfully up-lifting poem touches my spirit. Thank you! Warm hugs, Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
There are times when my days seem to grow longer. But, I never give up searching for the light. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sue! I am pleased that you continue to search for the light to brighten dark days! May the light that you reach for, forever banish the darkness... Warm hugs, Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Earth Angel - I'm on the way... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Who could best an Angel? Enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ Expect me to see me when the moon is full... Valentine hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. "Who can best an angel?", you asked. Why, an archangel such as yourself could! Have a wonderful day, my lord Angel hugs and kisses, EA |
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