Open Poetry #24 |
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Rambling Reflections |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Peer in dark mirror And see the sights of myself Reflect years and fears In the deep lines of my face I can not stare there In the silver backed horror That is far too real And echoes my nightmares screams In silent gazes As I watch ages mar me Lanced by harsh sun beams Hiding in hazes Avoiding the reflections Of that dark mirror Chancing just to see myself With sharpen steel blades To scrape yesterday away An escape from fate Before it can cast evil From the cold eyes staring back From cruel vanity From present reality That’s there within the mirror. Gloom |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Step away, sir... the coffee's on... we'll quietly chat, and discuss the counting of wrinkles... good write, as always... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is realy good..... vanity, vanity The mirror gives us a distorted picture... for all that is real and beautiful the mirror never noticed in the first place |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed a lot! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Sunshine A please to see you enjoyed Thank you, Zinsser, I’ve been told my view in the mirror is distorted, So I guess it a little bit of the minds eye also. Glad you liked Thank you, passing shadows, For the kind words Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you are wearing blinders most of the time, the mirror never lies, but minds do M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Don't look in the mirror. LOL well done. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Nakdthoughts, I have been told this before, My delusions blind me and always have Thank you, Seymour, Glad you liked and I do avoid the glancing Gloom |
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