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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Humor Humor is a dance of sense. The parry of a common blade Where sometimes in a lunge offence The touché will turn cascade. It stems within a field of flight Where fancy plays upon the loon And touches something out of sight That brings about an acts buffoon. It bridges on the sans absurd The bouquet of odd debris The wrinkle of a slippery word The serve of tea without the tea And sometimes it’s a loaded gun. And sometimes as fragile dew Full of foot stamp and fall down fun That evaporates in your view Reception is a flirt with mirth A barter and well worth its worth |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Barter away, and fill that teacup... with raspberries, of course! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Humor is a dance of sense. The parry of a common blade Where sometimes in a lunge offence The touché will turn cascade. It stems within a field of flight Where fancy plays upon the loon And touches something out of sight That brings about an acts buffoon. It bridges on the sans absurd The bouquet of odd debris The wrinkle of a slippery word ==================================== Reception is a flirt with mirth A barter and well worth its worth =================================== Stinkylove, your wit and wile always makes me smile..and with CLEVER lines like these... and that closing couplet of cool...we know you always just "get it". Where sometimes in a lunge offence The touché will turn cascade. The bouquet of odd debris The wrinkle of a slippery word and these....these are Randys lines  Where fancy plays upon the loon That brings about an acts buffoon.  *ww*    |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Gotta keep a sense of humor.. and you always do, Sweet Sy... |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Hmm.  Got me started with the first line.It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Hey, I'm up with the birds here! (Those that aren't frozen solid) Love your lyrical write this ayem. Tea is poured! ~Morning hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I think there truly is both a beautiful and hurtful side to humor, depending on the pretext and context of it, where if its for good moral it is such an enlightening medicine! (big hugggssssssss) I love this, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine OK a little humor for a JM, Your answer is my candy for the day. Perhaps some tea later? Nan Sweet Nan Hugs winston Nothing like getting started with the first line. Thank you. Nancy, Thank you my deer and good morning. Noah, What you say is true, thank you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh yeah, Seymour...  What whould we do without humor? It's so much fun to laugh and cut up, isn't it? Thanks for the smiles, friend.... Heart Hugs to you Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You, my dear Mr. T., put the "H" in humor! Warm hugs, EA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
When all else has failed in my life, humor always saw me through - Sy, my friend you truly are a man of wisdom you know. ~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Thank you and hugs back. Earth Angel Very sweet, thank you. Sharon, You are a pleasure to know. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What would we do without it... or you? *S* Both are so very important to living rather than merely existing. *S* I liked this very much, Seymour! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern, No doubt you are a sweetheart, |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Always a pleasure your poems, Seymour! - James |
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