Open Poetry #24 |
When You Say My Name |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You say my name as if it were a prayer - And I answer with a voice not my own. It is the voice of the other. The I that belonged before the birth of time. The I that I become again...if only for a moment, When you say my name. [This message has been edited by Ericc (02-12-2003 09:55 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
AAAWWW, Eric... This is simply beautiful.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ericc - very nice write... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) I too always get that feeling of worshipping my love as a goddess just speaking her name and how it makes me smile in my dreams! (sigh) It always brings a spark to my smile, yay, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-12-2003 08:58 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
deep and ethereal, nice |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How very beautiful. A lover's name holds magic and its sound liberates eternal waves of love. Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Whisper soft.......... Warm hugs, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This left me speechless.... ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Heck Ericc... I wasn't saying your name like a prayer.. I got choked on my Mt Dew... Very nicely done... sensual...soft...and oozes true feelings.. I enjoyed |
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