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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-02-12 08:33 PM



You say my name
as if it were a
prayer -

And I answer with a voice
not my own.

It is the voice of the other.

The I that belonged before
the birth of time.

The I that I become again...if only for a moment,

When you say my name.

[This message has been edited by Ericc (02-12-2003 09:55 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-12 08:34 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-02-12 08:37 PM


AAAWWW, Eric...
This is simply beautiful....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2003-02-12 08:53 PM


Ericc - very nice write...

BC

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4 posted 2003-02-12 08:58 PM




(smiles) I too always get that feeling of worshipping my love as a goddess just speaking her name and how it makes me smile in my dreams! (sigh) It always brings a spark to my smile, yay, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-12-2003 08:58 PM).]

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-02-12 08:59 PM


deep and ethereal,
nice

Margherita
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6 posted 2003-02-13 01:44 PM


How very beautiful. A lover's name holds magic and its sound liberates eternal waves of love.
Margherita

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7 posted 2003-02-13 01:54 PM


Whisper soft..........

Warm hugs,
EA

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8 posted 2003-02-13 04:18 PM


This left me speechless....

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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9 posted 2003-02-13 04:21 PM


Heck Ericc... I wasn't saying your name like a prayer.. I got choked on my Mt Dew...


Very nicely done... sensual...soft...and oozes true feelings.. I enjoyed

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