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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2003-02-12 07:57 PM

(A brand new Candy poem for this year, yay!!! Enjoy!)

CUTIE PIE
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/12/03

Hey, sweet apple of my eye
You know the moment I first saw you
Jumpin Jesus, with your gleaming eyes so bright
And your creamy face of tirami-su

And it feels so easy as key lime pie
For you are my Pavlova Deluxe
Just having you by my side
I have no reason to cry, to complain, what luck…

Come on baby, with your smile of mango chutney
Whether it is warm or cold outside, it is paradise
Your sweet lips taste like Creme Anglaise
You’re my delight, my cutie pie

All I used to taste was sorrel and soursop
Now with your grace of sugar cane, I have more love than enough
Your guava jelly tongue and angelic mauby song
That God taught you to sing to me over a round of coconut punch

Come on baby, honeybee
Night or day, you are my shining satellite
Destiny we will be and become destiny
My sweet cutie...

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-12-2003 08:23 PM).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-02-12 08:23 PM

oooh Noah, this one was so yummy it has given me a craving for something sweet. lol. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-12 08:28 PM

This is a awesome poem. You just made me hungry. LOL

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-02-12 08:29 PM

Magical thoughts!
Eric

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-02-12 08:31 PM

Noah, now this one is
very sweet

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-02-12 08:47 PM

Noah - now that sounds like a very sweet cutie pie...

BC

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-02-12 09:07 PM

delicious,

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-02-12 09:28 PM

enjoyed

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

8 posted 2003-02-13 02:39 AM

This one reminds me of Julie - my sweetie-pie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

winston
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 204
NW of Eden

9 posted 2003-02-13 10:38 AM

"creamy face of tiramisu," and "Pavlova Deluxe." Made me think of the best of American cream pies. Thanks.

It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency.
--G. "DUBYA" BUSH. June 14, 2001. Unaware of rolling TV camera.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

10 posted 2003-02-13 01:47 PM

Noah honey, I have loved all your candy poems. This one is no exception.

Happy Valentine's Day!!

Huggles, Marti

'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.'

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

11 posted 2003-02-13 01:57 PM

beautiful

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2003-02-13 02:13 PM

What a sweet read! Makes me want a tete-a-tete with candles and mountains of cream with my beloved!
Great!
Margherita

poohbear19
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 94
Colorado, USA

13 posted 2003-02-14 01:44 PM

good job

Andrea

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