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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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To dress the skies when they sit far better undressed like the way you feel far far better disguised freedom from prying eyes covers the hole in soul crippled when their words strip us bare. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I love the way your imagry leaps off the screen. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome imagery Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, this is beautifully written....... but, with a kind of sad feel about it. . . Again, are you okay???????  I sure do hope so....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thanks for your replies. very much appreciated  Ethel mae, yes, i'm fine,thanks for your concern as always friend. i think after having not written for so long on here, the words keep on coming, even thoughts that i'm not actually feeling come out sometimes. it feels good to be back here reading you all again. you all inspire me. i don't know where the sadness in my poetry comes from actually...considering i'm so in love?? i suppose from past, and other peoples present situations. again, thanks for the replies. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
i don't know where this is coming from but it's awesome stuff keep it coming |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yeah, Gemma, it is awesome writing....and, that's what proves a good poet, when he or she makes the reader feel so much that they think it's real...Keep up the good work.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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