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Future Love
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Future Love |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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I dare not say from what depths this came from... Future Love Hey, future love, where are you? And why aren’t you here with me? Don’t you feel me waiting? Just how long are you going to be? I won’t tolerate the absence I need you now, not at some distant time Don’t you sense my need? Don’t you want my rhythm and rhyme? I am tired of waiting Come give me what I yearn A partner for dinner and movies A love from which to learn Hey, future love, I’m so tired Of a cold bed, and perfect sheets I want your arms around me I want a love that completely depletes So, my future lover, partner and friend I stand, impatiently tapping feet Hurry love, And stop being so damn discreet |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I love this. I can imagine you tapping your toe. Love will find you usually when you stop looking |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you kind sir. I don't know. You would not believe some of the stories I have...(sigh). |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Never lose hope. You will find that one who will sweep you off your feet and ride off on the white horse or at least decent car. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
love your honesty susan. even when we're pretending we've stopped looking for love, we all are secretly doing our fair share of toe tapping!  lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxlearning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
My mom used to cross her arms and tap her feet at me alot?....But, would a trip to Kmart, cemetary and McDonalds help dear? |
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shannon harter Junior Member
since 2003-02-03
Posts 31waesaw,IN USA |
lol love this sis. poor, poor euwy! i love you. does that help? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, a very good write...but, I really wasn't looking, (and neither was he), when my Love and I found each other. In fact, we became very good friends before we fell in love with each other....... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I thoroughly enjoyed this! I believe that every one of your female readers has experienced this at one time or another! With a winsome wit such as you have, I doubt that you will have to wait much longer! lol Warm hugs, EA |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Gemjop-Without a doubt! Toe-God, how I love your humor! McD's and Kmart are good, but just what would we do in the cemetary? Dearest Sister-Don't you know its your love that helps me get through this life? Garygirl- Oh, the stories I have of male "friends"! Remember the movie, "When Harry met Sally"? Harry was sooooo right... EA- Thank you so much! Susan C. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Up for all the love struck dreamers |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Well Susan...what else?..."Get "laid" to rest?" |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Toe, Ohhhh...and that is exactly the depths from which I didn't speak. How ever did you guess? Time and exact location please. Brad, If you are trying to make me feel special, its working. Susan |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
susan you'll find that special someone  |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
OK, Susan, let's get on this thing RIGHT AWAY! Good Poem! I can feel your impatience...tapping toe! Rc |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You name the place. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
still very cool |
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