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Open Poetry #24
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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2003-02-12 11:41 AM

In this lonely room
the only sound I hear
is a familiar mailman

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Robert Frazier
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1 posted 2003-02-12 11:52 AM

BRose,  I get an empty, provocative feeling with this read.  How sad and forlorn

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2 posted 2003-02-12 01:01 PM

Very well done!
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3 posted 2003-02-12 01:01 PM

oh...I know what you mean...sigh
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