Open Poetry #24 |
Love is Hard |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Love is Hard Sometimes you say the wrong thing Then when you apologize You make it worse And they kick you out For the night Love is Hard Sometimes you love them Then other times you just Want to get rid of them Love is Hard Why won't she just let me go drinking with my friends? She always fusses And screams at me: That can't be the only thing your doing Love is Hard Dear God help me I can't do anything right For this woman Everytime I go off She thinks I look at other women When I have eyes only for her Oh GOD Why is love so hard? Why? I try to make her happy While I make myself miserable But I know one thing I may be miserable But I can't bare to lose her So I will deal with this hard love To keep her in my life NOTE: I am speaking from the man's viewpoint once again Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
It isn't my view Julie - you make love easy. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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pk Junior Member
since 2003-02-11
Posts 23 |
interesting change of view: good poem |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Love can be hard, yet if you believe in it strongly with sincerity, it can also be the easiest gift in the world! (sigh) Hang in there and let love guide you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
love is hard |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
This is so true i really liked it always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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