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the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-02-11 11:17 PM


Love is Hard
Sometimes you say the wrong thing
Then when you apologize
You make it worse
And they kick you out
For the night

Love is Hard
Sometimes you love them
Then other times you just
Want to get rid of them

Love is Hard
Why won't she just let me go drinking with my friends?
She always fusses
And screams at me:
That can't be the only thing your doing

Love is Hard
Dear God help me
I can't do anything right
For this woman
Everytime I go off
She thinks I look at other women
When I have eyes only for her

Oh GOD
Why is love so hard?
Why?
I try to make her happy
While I make myself miserable

But I know one thing
I may be miserable
But I can't bare to lose her
So I will deal with this hard love
To keep her in my life

NOTE: I am speaking from the man's viewpoint once again

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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1 posted 2003-02-11 11:18 PM


It isn't my view Julie - you make love easy.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

pk
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since 2003-02-11
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2 posted 2003-02-12 12:04 PM


interesting change of view: good poem
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-02-12 02:46 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Love can be hard, yet if you believe in it strongly with sincerity, it can also be the easiest gift in the world! (sigh) Hang in there and let love guide you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-02-12 02:48 PM


love is hard
carol
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5 posted 2003-02-12 03:10 PM


This is so true i really liked it

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

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