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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-11 09:16 PM



Finger Puppets

you have set
the stage
for all eyes
to watch me
but the truth
remains
for those who
wish to see
there is a vein
that runs deep
where deceit
can not touch it
it is you
they should watch
with the sins
you commit
and better watch now
where you point
soon there shall be
a different view
when your lies grab you
by the collar
and the finger is
pointed at you

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-02-11 09:43 PM


Ouch, Helen....you certainly could get the point across with these
words. I hope whoever this is intended for reads it, too.
You did a very good job with this....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

pk
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2 posted 2003-02-11 09:52 PM


excellent poem very powerful

"Imagine what you would do if you knew no one was looking"

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