Open Poetry #24 |
Finger Puppets |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Finger Puppets you have set the stage for all eyes to watch me but the truth remains for those who wish to see there is a vein that runs deep where deceit can not touch it it is you they should watch with the sins you commit and better watch now where you point soon there shall be a different view when your lies grab you by the collar and the finger is pointed at you "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ouch, Helen....you certainly could get the point across with these words. I hope whoever this is intended for reads it, too. You did a very good job with this.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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pk Junior Member
since 2003-02-11
Posts 23 |
excellent poem very powerful "Imagine what you would do if you knew no one was looking" |
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