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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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There is always an emptiness, like a tear in a sweater, the hole just increases in size as it gets caught on my hopes, those that will never arrive, and the loss of trust that I rely on. I thought myself able to discern between good and evil, right and wrong, and the virtue of my being, but I was wrong... "Silence Is Golden" [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-11-2003 05:59 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Yes. Yes. A lot of truthfulness in this piece Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
how we can appreciate the white lie for our well being in fact...nicely succinct this piece  |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
great piece... you have discerned much here, if not what you thought you could... but what you now know - just sounds like the voice of experience to me. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful imagery. Eric |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - you write with your thoughts, as always... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...we are alike |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Julie, thankyou for always reading my words and commenting. Nice tohave you back. Martin, oh those white lies aren't so bad..it's those huge ones *s M abbe, the voice of experience.. probably the voice of inexperience is more like it. Eric and BC, thanks Dixie, you are my shadow *s hugss M |
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