Open Poetry #24 |
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Faith |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown ![]() |
~ By Sue ~ The sun does not seem to shine Here on my side of town Troubles seem to follow me No matter who might be around The faith that I have inside I always try to hang on to Looking forward to each tomorrow In hopes for a day brand new If I should have some luck And have a better day some time Maybe then I will have A little peace of mind Until that time decides to come I will hold on to my faith you see Keeping it tucked safe inside Where nothing can take it from me 2-10-03 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sue, Now that's a good sign, enjoyed. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Good plan - Stay with it, Sue - It will serve you well... ![]() |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Wonderful attitude. Enjoyed this. Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is a really good poem, with very good thoughts... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sue, I think this is one of your best poems in it's flow and meaning. Enjoyed very much hugss M |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Hang on to hope and faith. It will keep you going! Deb |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Atta Girl!! You hang in there...I'm so proud of you. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssssss) Yes, you can make it and we all believe in you and here for you as we all send angel hugs out to support you! (sigh) Faith let be and become faith, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Sue, Hang in there and stay strong. good luck! |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
very nicely done. I could use a little faith myself. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, you hang on with all your might. I don't understand anything anymore, but I know we need to hold on. Hugs, Marti 'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.' |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you all for reading and replying. Lisann, I will share some of my faith with you. We can hang on together. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SmartChick - keep the faith, for it will surely change for you... BC |
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