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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-02-11 08:53 AM



Faith
~ By Sue ~

The sun does not seem to shine
Here on my side of town
Troubles seem to follow me
No matter who might be around

The faith that I have inside
I always try to hang on to
Looking forward to each tomorrow
In hopes for a day brand new

If I should have some luck
And have a better day some time
Maybe then I will have
A little peace of mind

Until that time decides to come
I will hold on to my faith you see
Keeping it tucked safe inside
Where nothing can take it from me

2-10-03



© Copyright 2003 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-02-11 08:56 AM


Sue,
Now that's a good sign, enjoyed.

Nan
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2 posted 2003-02-11 09:33 AM


Good plan - Stay with it, Sue - It will serve you well...
regards2you
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3 posted 2003-02-11 11:00 AM




Wonderful attitude. Enjoyed this.


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-02-11 11:59 AM


Sue, this is a really good poem, with
very good thoughts...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-02-11 06:16 PM


Sue, I think this is one of your best poems in it's flow and meaning. Enjoyed very much
hugss
M

BloomingRose
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6 posted 2003-02-11 06:24 PM


Hang on to hope and faith. It will keep you going!

Deb

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7 posted 2003-02-11 06:26 PM


Atta Girl!!
You hang in there...I'm so proud of you.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-02-12 01:20 AM




(big hugggsssssssss) Yes, you can make it and we all believe in you and here for you as we all send angel hugs out to support you! (sigh) Faith let be and become faith, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-02-12 01:37 AM


you go, girl!
kaile
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10 posted 2003-02-12 01:37 AM


Sue,
Hang in there and stay strong. good luck!

Lisann
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11 posted 2003-02-12 01:57 AM


very nicely done.  I could use a little faith myself.
NewEnglandlazurlu
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12 posted 2003-02-12 09:01 AM


Sue, you hang on with all your might. I don't understand anything anymore, but I know we need to hold on.

Hugs, Marti

'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.'

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
13 posted 2003-02-12 10:40 AM


Thank you all for reading and replying.

Lisann, I will share some of my faith with you. We can hang on together.

Bill Charles
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14 posted 2003-02-12 11:53 AM


SmartChick - keep the faith, for it will surely change for you...

BC

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