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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-02-08 02:09 PM




Chasms Of The Heart

~*Marge Tindal*~

Within this…………warm heart
there are many chasms filled
with the memory of our love
May you foreverly dwell in
happiness here ...... no
matter how far away
you’ve now flown
from this one
who loves
you
so
~

*Dedicated to Marsha’s lovely memories of Jack*
February 2003

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2003-02-08 02:16 PM


Beautiful content and lovely presentation!
Margherita

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-02-08 02:22 PM


lovely in words and form, Marge
hugssssssss to you
and  hope you are well
M

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3 posted 2003-02-08 02:25 PM


Marge, as usual, this is just beautiful. I sure hope you are okay. Hugs my friend!
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4 posted 2003-02-08 02:31 PM


Hello Lady

Oh yes, sweet Marge...this is absolutely beautiful. A wonderful Valentine for your friend.....with a verse she will cherish forever.  

(We all miss you here...hope all is well....  


Ethel  

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5 posted 2003-02-08 02:35 PM


Marge..so good to see you posting!
Don't stay away so long m'friend.
This is beautiful..in verse and presentation.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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6 posted 2003-02-08 03:25 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my soul thank you muchly, I know there’s light and I know it waits for me to return to it, and one day I will I promise I will. Right now the darkness holds me close, for the first few days it was all I could do not to try to sleep my time away. I know I can’t live like that though so I am trying to stay away from sleep which although deadens the pain also stops me from healing.

Night Comes

So it comes, night descends for me
The curtains of sorrow will cover me
I’ll drape my soul in grey and drear
Try to stop the falling of sorrow’s tear
All around will fade from my reality
As I accept the proof of your mortality
There will be no sunlight on my soul
And I will fall into hell’s darkest hole

Don’t speak of time’s healing hand
It is hidden by time’s shifting sand
I can’t walk the path away from you
My feet don’t know the way through
The stars won’t shine in my soul’s sky
There’ll be no truth in my heart’s sigh
Nothing remains but sorrow’s sight
And I feel pain descending with the night

The night comes to cover my eyes
It echoes to the sound of my sad cries
My soul lies bleeding in shadows night
No way back into day’s sunlight
There’ll be no touch that warms me
No smile that says my soul is free
The night comes let it take me away
Let me fade like the sinking of the day

The night comes taking you from me
And I’d walk into it quite willingly

Marsha

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
I wubs you too darling sister thank you for you

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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7 posted 2003-02-08 03:28 PM


Marge--A beautiful, caring poem.  Good to see you posting even under these sad circumstances.  Miss you!  
GG
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8 posted 2003-02-08 03:55 PM


this is beautiful!
heart-warming read!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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9 posted 2003-02-08 11:02 PM


To dwell in the chasms of ones heart~

What a comforting thought that is~

You are so thoughtful Marge....
How nice for Marsha to have such
a special friend in you.

Hugs dear lady~


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10 posted 2003-02-09 12:15 PM



Marge...buddy of mine~
Do you have ANY idea how big I'm smiling right now?
It is SO good to see you here, my friend,
and, of course, this is a beautiful poem as always.
I've missed you and your poetry SO MUCH,
but then you already know that.
I hope there's more where this came from.
Love and HUGE HUGS to you,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (02-09-2003 12:17 AM).]

Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2003-02-09 12:27 PM


Your heart has not changed, it's still so loving and warm and wide open as I remember your verses to be from the time we joined passions. May the winds blow through the windows of your heart and bring you peace
Love you, sweet poetess
Liz

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12 posted 2003-02-09 01:51 AM


WHOOHOO!

she's back! YEAH!

Marge, I've missed you so very much, as everyone here has, I'm sure...glad to see you again, friend.

Kethry
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13 posted 2003-02-09 06:50 AM


Marge,
that you can take time from your own chasms is wonderful, that you can pen this is amazing beyond belief.

Love you lady
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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14 posted 2003-02-09 07:43 PM


Lovely, Marge, absolutely lovely! And so wonderful to see you here again too!
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15 posted 2003-02-09 07:48 PM



Marge...
you are so very special
to all of us,
but when you draw others
forward?

You become
delightfully
even more special
than before...

Marsha?
Hugs.

Titia Geertman
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16 posted 2003-02-11 05:05 PM



Glad I caught this on time sweet gal, because it's tooooo beautiful to be missed.

And I knew Marsha would love it, as she did.
You're too good for this world and I hope to hug you again sometime dear friend.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

BloomingRose
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17 posted 2003-02-11 07:28 PM


Perfect Valentine poem.
Your talent is shining!

Deb

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18 posted 2003-02-11 07:35 PM


Marge,
How tenderly perfect. And fitting for too many of us I am sure. Bless you for being so kind and caring.

Marsha,
Peace and courage to you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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19 posted 2003-02-11 07:37 PM


Beautifully presented and tender.

Marsha, no words except I am so sorry for your loss.

Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2003-02-11 07:42 PM



Passions . . . . Friends
Sometimes another needs
a gigantic hug to help
them get through
For all of yours
We thank
you~

Marsha ... take this *huglet* and hold it close to your heart~
Love you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Corinne
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21 posted 2003-02-11 10:45 PM


Marge - always so wonderful to see one of your poems here!

Hope all is well, gal!

Cor

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22 posted 2003-02-12 11:37 AM


The poetry this site offers is awesome... no less so is the friendships formed.

This is beautiful, Marge... and a hug that distance just can't deter.

Mushy one... {{{{{HUGS!}}}}}

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