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Stagnant
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Stagnant My mind needs some fertilize And a pitchfork to loose the ties A stimulant of shredded wit A little salt or peppers chit It gets this way when days add up And nothing changes in the sup And I am left to fantasize Upon the old of my surmise It’s not that I complain you see I sail a decent fantasy. My phantom is the knight of nights With maidens fair for my delights But oft I wish a turn or twist A little bit of vein insist It adds a little candy sweet Just a little extra treat So if you’d let and lend a care I’ll write you in my next affair |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'But oft I wish a turn or twist A little bit of vein insist It adds a little candy sweet Just a little extra treat So if you’d let and lend a care I’ll write you in my next affair' LOL...knew I shouldn't have gotten up this early. Write on Sy! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, to make such magic a strong remedy and potion can do such a difference for many! (big huggggssssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"It's that restless Gemini moon, coupled with the Sun in Aquarius," advised the witch.  You write it well sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan My enjoy is your enjoy, LOL Noah, Thank you and you up early this morning. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Morning, Mr. T.! Thoughts are energy and therefore your fantasies are more than just your fertile imagination at play! In a cyber sort of way they are really occuring!--so enjoy your flights of fancy! Warm valentine hugs and angel kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, LOL by golly I think you're right.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Warm valentine hugs and angel kisses, now that's something to wake up to. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Write me in, I need a nice fantasy! Enjoyed. Susan C. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well..now if you are writing Duncan into your next affair..that should be different enough for both of you.. ( chuckling) |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Giggling here.... Write ON, Dear Sy...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, You're in. LOL Capt, Ya know I just wrote one on humor, thank you. Nan, You have been in a few of mine. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: You know, my mind skipped a beat and inserted "salt" for "sail"... and I thought, indeed he does... salt fantasies! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - dear poet, oh, if only you would...if only you could write me into one of your fantasy poems...I would be honoured. Take me away, this winter has been such a long season.  hugs, Chris"Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - abracadabra fertilize is there, dabracadbra new words will come... BC |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My mind needs some fertilize And a pitchfork to loose the ties A stimulant of shredded wit A little salt or peppers chit ======================================= Your mind is ANYTHING but stagnant and that clever verse of wit and rhyme proves it. Now Randy may be full of bull but it makes your verse a verdant view LOLA stimulant of shredded wit you crack me up Stinkylove...your sense of humor is priceless. *winkiewinkie* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Salt wit would be more interesting. Nightshade I'll see what I can do. LOL Bill, abracadabra might work. JM, You are the priceless one. Randy tells me all the time. Thank you for being you. WWRS |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, you are always a delight.... . . . It was cute that Duncan was the first one to reply on this one...HeeHee.....lol "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Yes it was and thank you for the read and comment. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
No matter fantasy or real, just keep writing! Enjoyed. Deb |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Missed you this morning sweetie.. Enjoyed the read.. But now it's coffee time? Want to wait till morning for your tea then? ~Evening hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Deb, I'll try, thanks for the read and reply. Nancy, Tea and hugs in the morning. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart, oh the ease of which you write such marvels. The delicacy of your writing is the gift of such artistry, you blend the shades of this in such a wonderful way You sprinkle fantasy with delight With words woven in fairy sight A mist of meaning may lie there A wondering of do or dare These little poems your souls gift Written to give us all a lift A magical web you weave us in They take us on a voyage within The sights of your Camelot my friend Won’t suddenly come to a dead end For your writings enchanted are But the sum of you is more by far Feed my soul with your fairy touch And I’ll tell you of my dreams of such I really do love this utterly utterly utterly, I've missed you dear one  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha So glad to see you back and posting again. Your words ae really a very large candle. And casts light a very long way. |
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