Open Poetry #24 |
Cupid Needs Glasses |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Cupid Needs Glasses Is cupid cross eyed He’s always missing me Tries to aim at my heart He hits the nearest tree Cupid needs practice I am the living proof Last year he flew over Landed upon my roof I am sure cupid’s blind Maybe blind as a bat Watched him one year He took aim at my cat I watch him each year Flying right passed me Convinced its his eyes Poor cupid cannot see I'm writing a note to say Its now me on a mission Dear Cupid get glasses Go and see an optician Mailed him an eye chart Along with my letter This year I am hoping His aims getting better Hope©2001 |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
This is really cute.Maybe leave some milk and cookies,seems to work for Santa.I enjoyed,Thanks. Live like it's your last day... |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
this poem is adorable! thankyou or sharing it love is blind,so i guess cupid is too.hehe ~Talia |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Mailed him an eye chart Along with my letter This year I am hoping His aims getting better" a morning's smile for you, very cute. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-11-2003 06:51 AM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Thank you for the grin! This is so cute Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks all I was glad to share the fun , it does seem pay to keep a sense of humour on Valentine day Hope |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
ROTFL... This is just tooooo cute, Hope - I sure Hope Cupid finds his way to you this year... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
And all this time I though old cupid was pissed off at me!! Very cute! Susan C. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
!!! Very nice !!! Poetry's supposed to be about "wit and wisdom" -- this one's got both. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Hope, Adorable! What a great sense of humor. Liked this very much. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks poet friends , your replies have been equally nice and fun to read Hope |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
This made me smile and laugh! What a classy, clever poem! You should watch out, he'll probably hit you when least expected! Rf |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe...uncontrolled giggling....this is so cute! I really enjoyed this write, cheered me up a bit today |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles) Silly cupid, that was a valiant effort, but you still have a lot of practice to do before you can be like a seraph! (kiss on cheek) Here's hoping he will succeed this time, this is a sad but also beautiful and cute poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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