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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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why did you stop, talking to me, your dreamgirl, was the fantasy all you wanted, im sorry,babe, i had to cross the line, and come off the page, had to see you as flesh and blood, had to blow my cover and show you too, that i bleed, but youve always known that, i've always spilled my guts, worn my heart inside out,for you, even told you my game plan as i played it, cause you breathed life back into my slumber, took the dive off the dark ledge to your light, gave u all, a taken woman could, put it on the line and took the risks, but why wont you, let me see, what the hell is the cross that your bearing, its only me......... i cant cage or chain you, you know, i've got to stay right here for now, im a safe one, but you've gotta open up, you,re slowly dying inside, losing your art, im here, to be, your jesus, your mesiah, your buddah, ive lived through a lot of crap, and yours wont blow me away either, im not afraid, cause i already seen the beauty, in your beast, just please dont be a pedofile,murderer,rapist or torturer of animals, so talk to me................. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
raw... and open.. I'd say someone should talk before you kick butt... or walk away. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Whew....strong one....."please don't be a pedofile, murderer, rapist, a Balladeer...etc.,.....Really a hopeful request I'd say... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
is balladeer so bad? |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Of course not....his mommy thought he was exceptional?....LOL.... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Inked, You left out sociopath, psychopath and bikepath....(off it into the bushes) Some ~things~ are best if left alone. Interesting poem, and hope you are successful in whatever you desire. Warmest regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very intense write of raw emotion and very well presented. Enjoyed the read, thank you. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Some see a green light change to yellow. Some never pass stop despite it's glowing red intensity. As long as it's a round trip ticket, catch another bus. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, really raw here. I like it and agree with the others above. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Straight from the heart inked I know it sounds hypocrytical of me but don't let it get you down. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You DO write with from that honest place. I call it just "dropping the blanket"-- it's exactly what I try to acheive every time I write. I applaud you for that, and for this. Enjoying your work! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - you sure do write some penetrating stuff. Nice work... BC |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Good golly girl you were soo needy, thank the Lord you woke up !!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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