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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-02-10 11:38 PM

confetti
falling from above,
heaven dances
on the ocean floor,

shining silver moon
kiss between
sky and sea,
will you marry me?

save a dance
hold me close,
finding you,
i can then find me,

beating heart,
your life
speaks sanity
in this absurd
uncertain world,

i see you,
with my
naked soul,
reveling in
this one truth -
that you exist

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-11-2003 05:03 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-10 11:43 PM

This is very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-02-10 11:45 PM

I look forward to your stuff....the sheer honesty of it, the way you cut through to the central truth without being cynnical or bitter. Very nice.

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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

3 posted 2003-02-11 12:05 PM

I will marry you.........if you are mormon.......I kinda got a wife...very beautiful.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-02-11 12:22 PM

This was good, Michele. I
enjoyed reading it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-02-11 12:38 PM

Wow where'd this come from? beautiful

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

6 posted 2003-02-11 02:03 AM

I see you are on another path. Very good writing my goddess.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-02-11 02:13 AM

wow! love the ending!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-02-11 04:55 PM

gracias a todo,
mormon? hmmmmm.........never done that one yet

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

9 posted 2003-02-11 10:51 PM

Mormon...give me a break....Dont spoil a nice read

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

10 posted 2003-02-12 12:49 PM

That's one more "m" than most guys are looking for......

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