Open Poetry #24 |
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Starting to realise |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
I’m proud of myself now I’ve conquered an obstacle One that stood in the way of me And stood in the way of my happiness A mind game that I’ve overcome Pushed it away so It wont hurt me Now with it gone the path is clear And I can almost see the end I pray that what I need lies at the end But it will only be the start of things Great things, happy things, all the things I want And if I continue to fight And continue to win Then the reason I was put on this earth Will be seen. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
i really enjoy reading this poem. it has all the element of good writing, and written from your heart. a wonderful tribute to both hope and faith in fighting for what we want out of life. take care. amy ![]() "love is like a butterfly-- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
I enjoyed your write also.In a world so full of negativity it's good to read something positive.Thanks for sharing your hope. Live like it's your last day... |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you for a boost of positivity we all needed! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sun of Faith, Like your username choice. Uplifting. Also, I especially like the last four lines of your poem, for that is the truth of all matters. God's blessings to you in your quest of happiness. Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
ahh theres strengh here i see it.. congrats.. and stay strong I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Self-affirmation can heal. I hope you find that, as well! |
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