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Open Poetry #24

To See!

chupdacabra
New Member

since 2003-02-10

Posts 3
New Jersey, USA

0 posted 2003-02-10 10:31 PM

To see you, is to see a world of,
Joy,
Laughter,
Comfort,
Bliss,
Peacefulness,
And love.
To see you, is to see a world of,
Happieness forever.
To see you, is to mu
Dream come true.
A dream of loving someone so
Beautiful,
Intellegent,
And so much a sweetheart as you.
Everything about you is perfect.
To see you is, is to see a dream come true.

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Sun of faith
Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 101

1 posted 2003-02-10 10:43 PM

I really like this one, good feelings and beautifully written, i enjoyed it very much, thank you!

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2003-02-10 10:55 PM

Honesty? I honestly like this (a few typos).Not my style but you will understand after reading my stuff

.I think if you give this to her,she will melt for you.

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