Open Poetry #24 |
God Took Her Away |
babygrrl1887 Junior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 11Toronto, Canada |
GOD TOOK HER AWAY Today I felt an empty pit inside And I just cried and cried I don't like it when that feeling comes It often makes you feel really numb My best friend left me today Now there's no one who'll say those "it's going to be okay"'s She won't ever come back And I don't feel like facing up to the lonely facts There's no one left to care And nobody to go to when things get so unfair And now when I just want to give up and yell There's nobody left to pick me up where I fell I wish she didn't go But I guess God needed her so Or He didn't see how much I needed her to be here To cry and tell her all my fears He left me here with nobody left to care He just took her right then and there I miss her so bad God must not have realized that I would be so sad As these tears run down my face I want to be with her in that paradise of a place I wish He didn't take her away She was there for me every day I love her so much She was constantly there for me when I felt out of luck She was an angel, more than any person could be And I guess that's why God took her away from me --------------------------------------------------------- In memory of my best friend, Nicolette "Don't think of it as we lost her, think of it as we gained a beautiful angel." Much love, Amy |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
hi there... first time i've ever read your work i must say it touched deep within me. i am so sorry from your loss. from one amy to another, God bless you and remember your friend is with you looking down on you from Heaven. take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching write...I send hugs |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
A very touching and sad piece |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Sad piece and heartfelt Cold hands means a warm heart |
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