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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Stepping Down No answer is my answer, as I come home to emptiness and the silence tells me more than words could ever say. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh my goodness sweet lady, how terribly sad. But, you know what? Things do get better. I found that when the silence was just too much...I put on some favourite music and just sang as loud as I could. It brought a smile to my face...but thumps from my landlady downstairs. lol. keep smilin'. You will be fine. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
loud piercing silence, the silence of goodbye, harsh echo of love's cry |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
so very sad, well written |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Very beautiful,I like this very much.It says perfectly,what it should say.It is written so well the reader feels a part of the silence.well done! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Maureen  Silence is so loud sometimes it feels like it's screaming. Doesn't it? "Love makes the world go around" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you, I am greeted with silence always. Some days it is just more noticeable to me than others. M |
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