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Cinquains for a Wynter's Day...repost
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Cinquains for a Wynter's Day...repost |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Cinquains For A Wynter's Day To Love To warm your heart To say the words with touch To know that every feeling is Special Special Hearts, one to one Beat each other's rhythm Lifeline needing, constant feeding To Share To Share The hushing sounds Of silent offerings Gifting in tenderness, to each, Their Love Their Love Affectionate Never wavers in cold Seeks the flame of passion, to light Each Night Each Night In arms, beheld A richness, one embraced Just a glimpse of eternity To Love M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-08-2003 11:14 AM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, this is beautiful... May I copy this off, so I can study this form of poetry? And, what exactly is the count of the syllables, or whatever it is? The easiest way for me to learn something is to practice the examples. Thank you, friend....  Hearty hugs from Ethel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Smartchick told me it is in the workshop challenge but it goes like this 2 syllables 4 syllables 6 syllables 8 syllables 2 syllables There may be a more structured definition in the workshop...and friends and I did them as a round, taking the last syllables of each and making them the first of our next ending with the first again. Thank you Ethel. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome design and thoughts! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Dixie, should be housecleaning but I am so cold I am trying to find words to warm me up  hugs M |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A well, Deep, fresh and full Of love lies within you. You dip from it for every word You write. Tasty. Every one. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sipping Of words laid out Tempting me to drink of Phrases, a feast of eyes and more Tasting I thank you Ed You tempt me to respond in poetry. M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very beautiful. Not easy such results with the counting of syllables. Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Margherita hugss and thanks M |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Interesting chain, this, don't recall seeing it before. More circle than chain, I'll bet there is a way to represent it as a continuous loop. You should give this variation a name, M. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
in another forum where we came up with this we called it a Cinquain Round. Nor sure if it is a good name or not, but thank you. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-11-2003 07:07 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Who let you guys out of the workshop? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I don't even know how to get into the workshop...so I post them out here.  M |
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