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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-02-10 08:33 AM



You are no farther than
a thought away-
And yet I fill this distance
with a thousand words.

So I let go.


Allowing words to drop unspoken.


The distance narrows.


I fall to a silence
holding only
you.

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1 posted 2003-02-10 08:46 AM


"I fall to a silence
holding only
you."

Very very romantic words to start my day Eric.
Lovely lovely images come to mind.
~Morning Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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2 posted 2003-02-10 08:48 AM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as your lovely words always seem to embrace such comfort and faithfulness! (smiles) May love always hold your heart dear, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2003-02-10 08:48 AM


Very beautiful.  Makes me yearn...

Susan C.

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4 posted 2003-02-10 11:30 AM


So beautiful!
Robert Frazier
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5 posted 2003-02-10 12:13 PM


Nice.  I can easily fall into this imagery.
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6 posted 2003-02-10 12:52 PM


Time stood still for a moment, and my breath caught.  Very beautiful and romantic!  I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry.

Daneekay

Neeraja
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7 posted 2003-02-10 01:42 PM


This is so sweet... romantic too...

Neeraja

BlueEyes
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8 posted 2003-02-10 03:24 PM




This one's a keeper....

BlueEyes

Margherita
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9 posted 2003-02-10 06:01 PM


Ahhh to be in such silence!
Very beautiful!
Margherita

cinnamongirl
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10 posted 2003-02-10 07:17 PM


Aaaahhh... the feeling of being embraced by a beautiful poem... holding only me.

One of the sweetest poems I've ever read.  It lingers with me long after I've left the physical words... the feelings created linger still.

Thank you... such beauty...

Love,
Moca

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