Open Poetry #24 |
Holding Only You |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You are no farther than a thought away- And yet I fill this distance with a thousand words. So I let go. Allowing words to drop unspoken. The distance narrows. I fall to a silence holding only you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I fall to a silence holding only you." Very very romantic words to start my day Eric. Lovely lovely images come to mind. ~Morning Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as your lovely words always seem to embrace such comfort and faithfulness! (smiles) May love always hold your heart dear, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very beautiful. Makes me yearn... Susan C. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
So beautiful! |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Nice. I can easily fall into this imagery. |
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Daneekay New Member
since 2003-02-10
Posts 3 |
Time stood still for a moment, and my breath caught. Very beautiful and romantic! I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Daneekay |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This is so sweet... romantic too... Neeraja |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
This one's a keeper.... BlueEyes |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahhh to be in such silence! Very beautiful! Margherita |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Aaaahhh... the feeling of being embraced by a beautiful poem... holding only me. One of the sweetest poems I've ever read. It lingers with me long after I've left the physical words... the feelings created linger still. Thank you... such beauty... Love, Moca |
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