Open Poetry #24 |
Let Each Tear Fall |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Let each tear Fall - They trace a story Down your cheek. I read it with a touch. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh....*SIGH*... ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Exquisite! Such sweetness might cause some more tears ... for the pleasure of your touch! Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, I too long so much to cry with my love in joy to touch her heart and know hoe special she is! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-08-2003 04:38 PM).] |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ericc,this is very true always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thoughts written in clarity in a few lines inspire me greatly Very well done Liz |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
So clear, So beautiful; Not just a falling tear, A touch, a story. Your own words, So clear.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful, so touching |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, you are such a good writer. You can say so much in just a few words...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
And that touch reads volumes into the soul... so beautiful. Gentle intensity in your words. So very sweet... Thank you... Love, Moca |
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