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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-02-09 09:17 AM



Do you ask for this love?

Or is it present as the fingertips
are to a touch...a veil of pleasure
that parts to deeper mysteries
as they trace your every curve?

Do you pray for this love?

As the breath is a whispered prayer
of gratefulness...warm against a
lover’s ear.

Do you cry for this love?

Falling to every tear unanswered
in its plea...falling unknown to
every question -
Falling to simply fall.

This is our love.

Every question tells you why.



© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-09 09:19 AM


Wonderful write Eric...
Beautiful words to read so early in the day.
~Morning hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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2 posted 2003-02-09 09:34 AM





"fingertips are to a touch"

I love that! And, the entire poem.


Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Margherita
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3 posted 2003-02-09 01:34 PM


A love that IS. So beautiful! Your poems vibrate so strongly.
Margherita

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-02-09 01:35 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2003-02-09 01:37 PM


This spoke very deeply to me...
A sudden shudder, that often unconventional what is shared is precious. ThisDiamond

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6 posted 2003-02-09 03:49 PM


"As the breath is a whispered prayer
of gratefulness...warm against a
lover’s ear."

How tender. It's such a poetic way to thank your special love.


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7 posted 2003-02-09 05:36 PM


Definitely one of my favorites.  Beautiful love infused in the sweetest of whispers.  How magic, the breath... ecstasy.

Thank you, sweet Messenger... as always, you deliver pure beauty.

Love,
Moca

[This message has been edited by cinnamongirl (02-09-2003 05:37 PM).]

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8 posted 2003-02-10 12:28 PM




(smiles) I think it is those simple gestures that really answer those touching questions, as love can make you feel even without words, it all rests all around you! (big hugggssssssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2003-02-10 02:25 AM


very romantic!
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