Open Poetry #24 |
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Every Question |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Do you ask for this love? Or is it present as the fingertips are to a touch...a veil of pleasure that parts to deeper mysteries as they trace your every curve? Do you pray for this love? As the breath is a whispered prayer of gratefulness...warm against a lover’s ear. Do you cry for this love? Falling to every tear unanswered in its plea...falling unknown to every question - Falling to simply fall. This is our love. Every question tells you why. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Eric... Beautiful words to read so early in the day. ~Morning hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
"fingertips are to a touch" I love that! And, the entire poem. Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A love that IS. So beautiful! Your poems vibrate so strongly. Margherita |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This spoke very deeply to me... A sudden shudder, that often unconventional what is shared is precious. ThisDiamond |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"As the breath is a whispered prayer of gratefulness...warm against a lover’s ear." How tender. It's such a poetic way to thank your special love. |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Definitely one of my favorites. Beautiful love infused in the sweetest of whispers. How magic, the breath... ecstasy. Thank you, sweet Messenger... as always, you deliver pure beauty. Love, Moca [This message has been edited by cinnamongirl (02-09-2003 05:37 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) I think it is those simple gestures that really answer those touching questions, as love can make you feel even without words, it all rests all around you! (big hugggssssssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very romantic! |
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