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zenny
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since 2002-11-24
Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-02-09 07:56 AM


Your eyes closed
travelling in dreams
Aspiration exposed
sweet smile gleams

Innocent and sweet
angelic face on my lap
I realise my life is complete
gazing my Love, taking a nap

I continue my motionless pose
and proceed adoring sleeps'view
speaking to your inner-ghost
I whisper 'I love you'

Arousing eyes lock on me
attempt to chase away awakened dew
Fiery kiss, originated in depths of hearts'sea
Showing...You love me too

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Verbeeck - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-02-09 08:56 AM


What a wonderful love poem!
Thank you.
Eric

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-09 11:54 AM


Very beautiful poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2003-02-09 01:57 PM


Sweet poem about a true love.
Margherita

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