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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
showers rinse of April glisten flower petals yet some would see this only as spring rain © 020903 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed, some would nice write |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Enjoyed this weather report, musing thoughts. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Very nice -- that's the kind of thing that cinquain is all about. The word "of" stopped my eye at first, but the rest -- sweet as rainwater. This one's a keeper! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this. Very true this poem is. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
S Arthur, Well done, enjoyed. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Thanks all for the comments. I tried to follow Nan's rules in the workshop, about the function of each cinquain line. I like that part of the challenge, as it raises the level of difficulty. In that light, the second line, originally "rinse my April", did not explain the title line as her rules said it should, so I changed it to "rinse of April", an explanation. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed your perspective |
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