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Nitro Glycerin
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Nitro Glycerin |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Nitro Glycerin Nitro glycerin rides my thoughts And my moves are from soft to naught I dare not shake its liquid hang To set off my worlds big bang. She is held in the sleep of night I dare not move ignite the light To wake the force that runs a course A sauce that does not take too coarse She is my love my snow white dove Sent me from below or above It makes no difference, which it is She is my Isabel my Iz. I’ve walked the line a long, long time And still not made this nitro chime It keeps me quick and slick of head One step in front of nitro dead You think it funny, it’s not so Just one mistake and up I go. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sey, Just as I burst out laughing, the line was: "You think it funny......." Quite a writer, you are. Enjoyed! warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is one broad you wont be kicking out of your bed, huh? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey you... 'tain't up to us.' I happen to think that's a pretty good rule too. grin. oooh. need to write to you too. Do you work in acrylic? It's a rather fast medium for me. even with that tap tap tapping of the foot. geez sy, we need to talk, the oils and gels don't pull the same as water base. oh. somehow I keep forgetting yer not answering. I'll shaddup. But? Was just thinking how your poetry must be much like your art--dabs, dabs, of related color to make a dot matrix of the whole. OH. I was gonna shaddup. heh.  mornin' lovie! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Glad you enjoyed, just a little tongue in cheek. inkedgoddess Haven't done it in over 60 years. LOL |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sy...good morning to you! The clever of your write is one way to ignite...Iz' love for you. You cannot go THAT many years... and still not have a spark or two! Hugs to you both. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Blame it all on Randy and you'll be alright ... let him feel the flame of Izzy's ignite. She can only stay mad at the most for one night... you hold the secret to defusing her with delight. Nitro packs a punch with its insite of bright ... but your poetry is pure DYNO-MITE!!  and if the rhymes dont work...try the winkies. *L* who can resist a wink from Randy????? (not I said the moth) lol    Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past? |
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likitysplit Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 23Alabama |
Sadly, (and my police record will verify this), nitro ran thru my veins for many years...(along with several other things other than blood)...but, then I diluted it with various types of alcohol and I'm normal now,normal now,normal now, but I still can't write poetry?....Hell, you'd think with a background like mine, I've done nearly everything, legal and illegal, I'd be able to write a simple poem?....Oh well, at least I have enough of a mind left to read stuff like yours......(I understand Balladeer uses glycerin suppositories...ya think that...oh, never mind) (By the way Sy, my son's been on this thing all night...and for some reason I can't get my "Toerag" signed in this morning..so, this isn't by likitysplit...it's by me!!! [This message has been edited by likitysplit (12-20-2002 08:10 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Hi love, I found acrylic better done with a palette knife. It is a fast drying medium. I did do some plastic paintimg but it was my own medium I prepared. Plastic on plastic But that was about 55 years ago and had a problem, the plasticizer migrated over the years and the surface turned tacky. But that's another story. LOL Have a wonderful holiday. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Your a love. JM, Dear Tink, Glad your computer is working again. By the way I got your mail and had a pic nick opening the content. All that was missing was the Christmas Tree. LOL I'll send you something back but don't want to contend with the post office lines right now. WWRS  Toe, Always enjoy your comments, LOL and as far as your poery goes, it's good enough to catch Balladeers eye. Have a great holiday. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (12-20-2002 09:22 AM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Sy...according to Balladeer....I've caught alot of folks eyes...some gal as I recall?... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just popped in to let you know I enjoyed the morning read love. Going for more tea...join me? ~Hugs sweetie~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Why I'd be enchanted, |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A cheeky tongue perhaps. That big things come in small packages has kept you fleet of foot. Enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells Exactly, LOL |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - I'm late....I'm late  ...but just had to stop by and read your morning poem. Wonderful as always!! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, You are a dear, thank you. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this was so much fun to read as well as some of the comments, hehehehehe More than 60 years! Wow! Your pic must be an old one cuz that guy couldn't be 80 or more, that's for sure! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, LOL thank you, not an old picture. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Seymour, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such a romantic boom blasts here, I love it, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thought of your humour here and also reflected on how an uncle of mine used to take nitro-glycerin tablets under his tongue for the angina he had...best of holidays and health to you Sy  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Can always count on you for a boost, thank you. ecrivan Thank you for the hats off. Have a good holiday. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
ohhhh..enjoyed the humor with my morning coffee..thanks!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at this one Sy. Be careful with that Nitro.  Wake up, Iz, Sy has a morning smile for you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, I damn sure do think it's funny! LOL laughing at the entire thread... not to mention "slick of head" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandpiper Enjoyed your enjoy. Midnitesun Enjoyed your reply, thank you. passing shadows Cute reply thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I thought I had signed this one... maybe I did...perhaps I should go back and read the thread again. Excellent write and much enjoyed Sy! ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Well despite you claiming it isn't funny I still had a smile on my face, you write with such grace and rythm! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Thank you for the like and hug. Aenimal, It was meant for a smile, thank you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling...you two are such a perfect couple and such a tribute to love that lasts. God bless you both this Christmas |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Thank you and bless you my champion hugger. And our wishes for a wonderful holiday. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Not all are blessed with love and a sense of humor...so glad you are!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
i love how people here can write about anything. nitro glycerin, ha. this was catchy and i enjoyed it. one thing though. you used those phrase 'i dare not--' two times. i think it loses it substance the second time around. maybe you should change it to suit. hm. thats just me though. cool read. -chris. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, my Mom and Dad have been married for over sixty years and they act like teen-agers in love, sometimes. Sounds like you and your Isabel have that kind of spark...HeeHee!! Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
christian Good thought and good comment, thank you garysgirl Well it happens, thank you sweet. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - no shaking, no shaking, one could go boommmmmmmmm.... BC |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, this cracked me up! Be careful ... Hugs and loves to you and Isabel. Marti Let our love circle the world and |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Don't worry I wont shake, LOL Marti, Glad you enjoyed. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, Sy, you have Fran rolling on the floor with this one! Just be sure to keep being careful. The explosion could occur there but the shock waves would reach my house!! HANDLE WITH CARE!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, Glad Fran enjoyed and I've been careful so far. LOL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
She is my love my snow white dove Sent me from below or above It makes no difference, which it is She is my Isabel my Iz. ROFL... I know you say it's not funny... but it Iz! LOL And you've obviously learned how to walk whatever line she draws in the sand... your 60 years together are simply beautiful... as are the both of you! *S* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sy~ I'm so glad I found this tonight...I'm smiling big. I have to echo Martie..your combination of heart a sense of humor is a wonderful and refreshing treat. I just LOVE reading you, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Nothing like a good ROFL. Vicky, You're one of my favorite readers, thank you. |
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