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Margherita
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0 posted 2003-02-08 04:52 PM



The dance


Come my Angel
hold me close
lift me up and dance
my favorite waltz
with me.

Whisper words
of love in my ears
slowly with each step
I'll smoothly detach
from deeply
cherished bonds.

Ease my sadness
while I scatter my tears
in wide circles
to the beloved's hearts,
as tiny pearls to shine
in sweet memory.

Let the music diffuse
increase its volume
to silence my
sighs of sorrow.
Ascend with me
through candid clouds
up into the embrace
of immensity.

Delicate silver threads
are enfolding us
with each turn, see,
to radiate and release
my soul to the
Bright Light
of Eternity.

Come my Angel
hold me tight
and dance with me!


Margherita

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1 posted 2003-02-08 04:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, once again your golden heart writes of true love, sweet friend, I love dancing and I dream ever so much to dance with my dream girl in the future, yay, this is magical, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ericc
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2 posted 2003-02-08 06:40 PM


Who could resit this golden invitation to a dance of love.
Beautiful.
Eric

Jaime
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3 posted 2003-02-08 07:55 PM


My boyfriend could resist.

Oh well.. I'll dance by myself..

Lovely poem. Dancing is so, so.. freeing. (Is that a word?)

- Jaime

a man of quality is not threatened by a woman of equality

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2003-02-08 10:12 PM


Nice moves Margherita~
Thanks for sharing the dance~



passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-02-09 02:37 AM


lovely write...I like it
Margherita
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6 posted 2003-02-10 05:37 PM


Thank you all, dear friends for your kindness.
This was a dance of "detachment" in a moment of great need of peace.
Love, Margherita

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