Open Poetry #24 |
My Belonging Place |
Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
When time's harsh and unsympathetic hand gently replaces day with dusk; When the night lights twinkle under a serene sky, and the stars come out to play volleyball with the full and benevolent moon... When the sound of waves reminds me of the endless cycles of life, where inspiration fills my heart and poetry suffuses the air I breathe; bringing the two oxygen molecules together in a lover's embrace... When a rainbow colours my world and people discuss destiny and life, and books and dreams... Not nightclubs and fashion and how drunk they got and how much they hate their parents. And that moment when all of life's worries melt into the healing place between two soulmates eyes who understand... When time's harsh and unsympathetic hand gently replaces day with dusk; when the night lights twinkle under a serene sky and the stars come out to remind me that I am a tiny but essential beat in an endless cosmic rhythm... This is my belonging place. This is my home. NB: and PiP is so much like this that it's scary. Thank God! The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Shireen this is a wonderful write. I can't really pick a fav line because I like the entire peice. It has a lot of solid ideas in it. Good write! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Shireen, "My Belonging Place", your title captures your sentiment perfectly. I like this a great deal. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Wow, this one blew me away. Well, my antipodean cousin, I got an undulating sensation as I read it. I am awestruck and speechless. I will come back with "any tips for improvement" when I have had a thorough perusal of it. :-)) [This message has been edited by winston (12-20-2002 07:14 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i enjoyed your poetic vision, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you paint quite the place... hope you find it where it truly resides..inside.. enjoyed |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Thank you all for sharing your reactions. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I really like this "home away from home" very much, too. I like the way you wrote about it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Outstanding. I am delighted to be able to read things like this. If I never before said welcome, I do now. I look forward to reading more from you. May ripples of LOVE |
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