Open Poetry #24 |
Without You |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
~ By Sue ~ If the day ever comes I have no thoughts of you The sadness then will leave My life will be brand new It will not be so hard For me to see the light Of happiness ahead The sun will shine real bright Until that time does come I will struggle on through As the days do go by Here without you 2-8-03 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahh the longing ... you express it beautifully! Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It will get easier. I know, everyone says that..and I never believed it either..but it does. Nice poem hugs M |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, though sad, this is a beautiful poem.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very sadly touching, sweet friend, I know eventually love will find your way again, you are so deserving of it! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sue~ the realistic pain in this hit me so hard...i hope that if this was written from real experience, that your heart begins to mend and you smile once again. beautiful write. take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that time will come my friend, hopefully soon |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Let's keep the lights on and shining, Sue... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you all for your friendship and support. |
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poohbear19 Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 94Colorado, USA |
Well I hope everything works out for you but good poem. Andrea |
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