Open Poetry #24 |
A Poet prays |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I know this time will pass. The words will come as ever - Yet still I mourn their passing. And wait in the left emptiness of their want. A poet prays with hallowed words - and in their absence silence. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great expression, Ericc. I know the feeling well. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Yet still I mourn their passing. And wait in the left emptiness of their want.' I understand this well. Enjoyed the style and content. Nice to meet ya! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, very wise words, this morning... |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Longing for the birth of another whisper; that poem that reaches for you to give it life... the silence between words is powerful and bittersweet, aching and soothing all at once. How beautiful... thank you for this inspiring poem. There are words waiting- we just have to keep reaching out and let them flow as they will. Yes, I know the feeling of reaching, waiting for that familiar touch... for you, your fingers always meet the whispers of God. The silence in between varies in length, but you always make contact. And for that, we are all blessed, as you share these with us. Love, Moca |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"I know this time will pass" that's important to know |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Words always dance in a poet's heart, you just wait to decide for the right choreography..... praying "trustfully". Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwww, I can understand the frustration of writers block, I don't get it that often because I believe one method to getting great writing is to see things you've never seen, read a lot of books, and research about different cultures in the news or in literature! (smiles) That's my advice to you, as always your poetry is so lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes...I know this feeling... Well said. ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you inspire me... She Whispers be still and listen she whispers in the shadows turn your head to hear her her kisses of the wind |
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