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A Chiseling Mind
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A Chiseling Mind |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A Chiseling Mind She placed him there, in her mind carved him out of stone, gracefully molding his form, chiseling out the coldness, as touch brought him to life. She dressed him in dark, his paleness stark against the folds. Her blush dominating his hold confusing her with each touch. She graced him with her presence, candles silhouetting her every move. ~~*~~ Out of words, comes the dance, a conversation in step, her mind taking the turns, each element learned, inspired by the war that rages inside, coming full circle to meet him, the player, and in a moment of weakness her mind dances to fate, its tune born again in his arms. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A Sculpture left open to interpretation and each time i've read this, I've seen a different view. But your mind has created interesting images and in this self portrait and an image in your mind Wonderfully written as always |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Out of words, comes the dance, a conversation in step, her mind taking the turns, each element learned, inspired by the war that rages inside, coming full circle to meet him, the player, and in a moment of weakness her mind dances to fate, its tune born again in his arms.' Moments of weakness sometimes lead to moments of happiness. Enjoyed Maureen. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
....is a beautiful mind, I think. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely, lovely feel to this a warmth with just a hint of melancholy, something like when a wonderful happening must come to an end Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, this is beautiful, with a dreamy feel to it. I haven't been on here enough lately. I'm missing too much excellent poetry of all you fine poets. Glad I found this one today...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 M, I'm gifting this to my library. It's a first class sculpture, polished and sturdy enough to withstand many readings. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Wonderfully intimate! Touches on many levels. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Liz, thank you I appreciate your inspiration all weekend. And I take a backseat to your beautiful poems. Duncan,I am always searching for those moments of happiness *s Thank you Dixie, you are very sweet hugss M Virginia, or maybe a beginning  I never seem to get it right.M Ethel, and I am glad you stopped to leave your mark. I appreciate your comments always. Midnitesun, well you honor me, and I thank you for that and for reading. hugss M Robert, yes I was trying to do that..be a touch intimate. Glad you recognized it. |
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