Open Poetry #24 |
The Flirtatious Lady |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
The Flirtatious Lady What is it with her Whatever can it be Gets more attention Much more than me Could it be her eyes Obliging her gaze Or how she wiggles Excitedly she plays Whatever can it be Is it her flirty look Sleeps most her day She can’t even cook Could it be her nose Rubs neath his chin Stroking her daily He gives her a grin A lucky lady is she Awaiting by his bed She does no chores Though loved and fed I am not competing How did this occur This teasing mistress With four legs and fur This was lighthearted Jealous I’ll never be The flirtatious lady is The dog in the family Hope©2000 (Sharing a little fun , found this one in my old files ) |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
lol glad you shared the fun! its 3 30 AM ..laughs are good. And I agree, they just get too much attention!... or not enough *calls in her dogs* Enjoyed! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Alyssa , glad I could bring a few smiles , yes I spoil the dogs too Hope |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~Smiling Hope My cat is or was like that. My husband would give her more attention than me,and she the same... until he left and now knows that I am the one who feeds her and always did. She won't leave my bed now, whether I am there or not... maybe she's afraid I will leave her, too. hugss M |
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Jaime
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Thank you, thank you, thank you for posting this... I am always glad when I stumble upon a poem that makes me smile. I have three cats and they are some of the most spoiled little people I know. I have to leave them soon... I'm always so sad that they won't understand. (College) - Jaime a man of quality is not threatened by a woman of equality |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this is so cute Hope! You sure had me until the end. Good stuff! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hope, I loved this. You had me until the end, too.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Loved this! I'd drop the last stanza, the explanation...it's a kicker as is, doesn't need 'splainin. |
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