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FIRST KISS
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/16/01



A first kiss
Is the most magical gift of all
The moment I touched your lips
The heavens pour out, down into your heart I fall

You gave me my first kiss
Sharing it with you, when our hearts first touched
Heartstrings softly twitching, like the flick of a light switch
Feeling your love for the first time, wanting to forever love you so much



I think all the time about that first kiss
Holding you close, watching sparks fly feeling your warm breaths and sighs
And a sour lips were touching, I moaned my happiest wish
We would always be together, two true lovers for all time

I'll never forget that first kiss
You, my love, have given me the happiest feeling I've ever had
From your lovely ruby lips, you gave me, my first kiss
And with you, my love, it will never be the last!












"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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1 posted 2003-02-08 02:28 AM

AWWW Noah, this is so pretty. I love it...
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2 posted 2003-02-08 02:52 AM

Yes the first of many to come your way...look for them...James
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3 posted 2003-02-08 04:07 AM

Well just look at you!  How darn cute was that?  You are definitely getting good at graphics and the combination is wunderbar.                                                            

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4 posted 2003-02-08 10:15 AM

Really sweet...those kids are cute!!
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5 posted 2003-02-08 12:24 PM

...speechless...
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6 posted 2003-02-08 01:34 PM

Such tenderness!
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nice
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