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The Trees Wore Coats
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The Trees Wore Coats |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
February crystal cover dappled onto one another Limbs entwined in silver white, the trees wore coats So wonderful as set against the sparkling qualifier A day to dawn and move along, these cotton floats As I will wander, dipped a toe ‘tween Autumn and Summer Days unwind in nameless hours, like chilly anecdotes To find again the beginning of a season as I love you Into my ear lilts last remembered tones in soft denotes And here I gather back to what has felt so good together Facing into warmer weather, in places green my smile dotes To recollect a stirring thorough, shamrock placed from palm to palm Giggled clearly when you hear me say I LOVE YOU fond remotes It could be, some wild and free found, meant to see In February warmed auspiciously, the trees wore coats Copyright Kkh 2/7/03 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Kathleen! Lovely expression! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful, Kathaleen. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So wonderful as set against the sparkling qualifier A day to dawn and move along, these cotton floats Shaking my head and wondering how you do it. Another beauty TD~ Your poetry always leaves me smiling~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I have no idea how you do it either, but I do know this is another wonderful write. Enjoyed greatly. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fascinating layout interesting tag and the end of each couplet enjoyed the images and the read Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
....in awe.... |
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