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Romantic Guitar
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“ROMANTIC GUITAR” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Divine melodic sounds from wood, character sings out just right, bluesy sevenths are the chords, reaching out to you this night… Fingers touch strings lightly to entice, a strum of romance sighs in desire, whispers of notes touch you inside, tenderly I play them to conspire… My eyes gaze into yours and I listen, as you sway hips rhythmically to allure, tenor is clear, as I sing to your smile, it beckons with a mystical lure… This romantic guitar hypnotizes slowly, dreamy evening together with you, walk with me into moonlight’s theme, love will we make, all the night thru… ~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh I love the sound of a guitar Bill... My son plays and sings acoustic..wonderful.. and oh so romantic. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Bill, this is lovely, sweet friend, I too love to strum that Ovation of mine, love those D7 and G7 melodies! (big hugggssssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you!' Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
music is a very beautiful thing, And in your case a very romantic way of expresion. Good write Billy boy |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
How could she resist such a lyrical invitation?! This is a well-written lesson in how to win a lover in the good old *Love Me Tonight* tradition from a musician who obviously knows his crotchets and quavers. My love of music -both listening and performing- augmented my enjoyment in the reading (and re-reading) of this piece. Patrick Talty |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--I'm sure the sound of instrament and man make romance even more beautiful. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
what alovely melody this...nice soft touches Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
I can almost hear the strings sigh and sing! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is beautifully romantic... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
My eyes gaze into yours and I listen, as you sway hips rhythmically to allure, tenor is clear, as I sing to your smile, it beckons with a mystical lure… Love the sound of this music your playing~ |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Bill, This was really beautiful... I've played that type of music in the past and it brought back some sweet hurting memories...But I loved your poem and I love my memories. Thanks for you posting it!! Kitty [This message has been edited by Kitty** (02-07-2003 09:55 PM).] |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC OK - I am hooked. The gentle breeze, the romantic guitar in the moonlight. Hmmmmm - sounds great. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful music, Bill! Very well done! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Fingers touch strings lightly to entice, a strum of romance sighs in desire, whispers of notes touch you inside, tenderly I play them to conspire…' Very cool image here Bill. Soft and romantic, perfectly tuned. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
geez...how sweet  |
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