Open Poetry #24 |
Turn Like This |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Turn...like this. Turn, Turn as the sun turns towards The night – And puts the day behind In brilliant color. Turn as the moon, Soft…with the tenderness of a parting lover, As it turns to kiss the night Goodbye. Turn like this. Turn as the leaf, That browns to autumns touch And turns to fall in winter's hand. Turn as the seed turns Towards its secret self and follows The pull of greater dreams to Rise. Turn as if your name is called, As a hush beneath the evening breeze, Turn…yet there is no one there To answer you. Turn like this. Turn…a thousand times turn, Just to see whom you are Facing. Turn like this…and see who you really are. Turn. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm dizzy from all this turning. LOL, enjoyed it anyway. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh Eric...I love this... But..... Can we stop just for a few minutes? Good write! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is beautiful. I enjoyed every line of it, and there was not one too many turns, and I especially liked the last. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poem took so many good turns, and I liked this one most of all~ Turn as the seed turns Towards its secret self and follows The pull of greater dreams to Rise. Enjoyed~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, what a pirouette of a smile, yay, I LOVE IT!!! (big huggssssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ericc, i loved this one i enjoyed all of the turns always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good stuff! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
These words are music and have a wonderful rhythm ... You made me turn ... and "follow the pull of greater dreams to Rise....." Margherita |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
I turn... and the world turns with me. I turn, and I see the beauty in the face of my love; I turn, and I see my own beauty in the mirror of my Beloved. Thank you for such a magic, blissful poem... this is exquisite. Love, Moca |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this is really beautiful. I enjoyed reading it....... "Love makes the world go around" |
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