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Words Don't seem Sufficient Enough....again for my "Valentine"
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Words Don't seem Sufficient Enough....again for my "Valentine" |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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As I make an effort to write my feelings from my heart about you, my sweet love I don't know where to start There are so many emotions churning around inside of me As I try to write them down for you, my love to see Being apart as we are now makes it hard our love to show We try proving through many ways this true love, to each other know The first thing I think of when in the morning I awake At night when I close my eyes in dreams, images you and I make Amazed am I at the emotions thoughts of you make me feel Though other loves I've had none have ever been so real This love we have found travels across the miles For each of us to feel our love outweighs the trials When we see each other face to face as we did a few days past So hard the effort we try to make each memory we share to last The feel of your hands as you gently touch my face The lines and shape of me with fingertips, you lovingly trace The looks we exchange as gazing into each others eyes Seeing deep inside the other where our inner emotion lies Etched into our memories when hours to each other we talk Of our true love and the paths of this trail of life we walk Our love would become special we knew from the moment we met The chemistry exchanged between us was as strong as it could get We met about this time of year a few years ago, it's been This love we share has grown each day more and more since then We have pledged to each other forever our hearts to give To never part, to walk hand in hand for as long as we both shall live  [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-08-2003 02:46 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, if Gary wasn't putty in your hands before, he certainly will be after he reads this message from the heart. This makes for a very special Valentine's Day! May your love for each other continue to grow Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
lol Linda,  Me thinks we have been "putty" in each others hands for a while, now...  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love that thought of being putty in anothers hands and one holding and caressing and stroking a loves heart like a baby and wrapping it gently in a warm velvet blanket! (kiss on cheek) I dream of making my dream girl feel this way always, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice...and mushy |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The perfect Valentine. This says it all. Eric |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ethel i loved this ,no doubt in my mind you will send this to gary ,Rita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Words are all we have, and yet often times they're still not enough. My guess is he knows Ethel~ Love is in the air, no doubt!  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, again you said just the right thing. Thank you my friend.... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ethel~ This is so beautifully expressed. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, yeah...it is much, isn't it... Thank you for replying, friend. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, thank you. I think he will like it... . . Rita, yeah, you know I'll send it to Gary..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, Yeah, I do believe he knows.... . . . Vicky, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :loveya; . . Heart hugs to you both.... Ethel |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
well it looks like cupids arrow has found you dear......looks good on you. Nice and mushy write...I'm sure he'll love it. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Lisann, for the compliment. Yeah, old cupid definitely shot us with his arrows.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Ethel... This is the perfect Valentine! Hope you and Gary can be together for this one. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Ethel, this is the most beautiful love poem. I think your Gary will cherish this forever. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nancy, thank you so much. I was on the poem putting the thumping heart like someone had...I think it was Sea. he definitely makes my heart thump...HaHa!! . . . Sue, Thank you. That's sweet of you to say. Yeah, Gary and I love to write each other love poems. . . Heart hugs to you both, Ethel  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Simply beautiful, Ethel. You are a poet, even if you don't want to admit it.*s I enjoyed your loving touch to Gary. hugss M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - at times words are enough, but it seems to me that they aren't. Oh why so many miles to traverse I wonder... BC |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful Valentine, Ethel... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, thank you, lady. You're real sweet... . . Bill, thanks for your sweet reply. I appreciate it... . . Scorpio, thank you very much for replying and for liking it..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Ethel Mae, i know how u feel, words will never do the feelings justice, well not mine anyway. it's all made up for in the 'knowing'. you both know, when in eachothers prescence, that youre both feeling exactly the same way. it's such a contented, completely trusting feeling, that is priceless. your words paint these pictures better than you think you little sweetheart. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello, Gemma...  I've missed you, girlfriend....... You must be really busy in school. I always know that you understand what I'm trying to say in my poems. Thank you for reading them.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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